- I like very much how you write the text in #5 and #6. Just put a comma "," before the word Viola, like this: "La Grande Mela, Viola!"
- The "giglio", symbol of Florence must be red, because it'S the official color of the city since hundreds of years - I like the color intensity of #8. - please no flags on the side of the word "New York". - The pannels of the ball could be: 1) an italian flag, 2) an american flag, 3) the "giglio" - Another idea, the pannels of the ball could be: 1) an italian flag, 2) an american flag, the "giglio" is on the background pannels of the ball as you did in #5 but without the american flag.
I like the #30, but the idea of "New York" is still missing in your submission. Try to think of something that represents New York (like the Statue of Liberty, or anything else that give the idea of New York).
very well done! I like the entry #36. I think that with this new concept we can make the soccer ball with the standard colors (black and white) and with all pannels. This will make it more recognizable.
Could you please also try to make the text appear on the right side instead of underneath, so that the logo is bigger?
Thank you in advance and again "brava" for the good work. I give you the first position!
great job. I got the first position, but let me suggest anyway some improvements:
we will use the logo also for cups, t-shirt and scarves, so we need all important elements of the logo to be as big and recognizable as possible.
Try to make the "Giglio" a little bigger, maybe making the arm of the statue of liberty little bit shorter. I leave to your experience and professional skills as designer if this is reasonable or not.
I can't see the difference between #59 and #60, between #61 and #62 and between #67 and #68. Maybe you had a technical problem while submitting and two copies have been uploaded. I will discard copies.