Entries # 32 and #33: These are nice, and have great energy flow. However, BLUE is not any part of our color scheme and we do not wish to add it. If there were the addition of bottles somewhere below the wave, it could be quite interesting. Also need burgundy amongst the colors. Perhaps a burgundy wave with the wave filling bottles...
Entry #42: We LOVE this, the best so far. Can you make the bottle on the right look like an Olive Oil bottle, filled with rich GOLD, and the bottle on the left like a Vodka or Gin bottle, with clear liquid in it? Keep the rest the same. Add a richer green in the name so it stands out...? Also, we are Vigneron Specialty Products, not Special Products, and we need the name "XpressFill" to show up too. This is really great, wonderful flow and energy, and fun. Yay!
#44 I tried to rank this # 1 but couldn't. This one is VERY close to what will be a great logo for us. We actually use "XpressFill" as our "brand" more than Vigneron Specialty Products, and it is our website name as well. Our tag line is "Technology to Bottle Your Passion". Please try using those in one rendition(or a few) so we can see what they look like. Also, PLEASE do one rendition with a flow of liquid pouring into the bottles so that it looks like the bottles are bring filled. In looking at the bottles, the "wine" bottle, the most predominant bottle with the burgundy "wave" inside, would look best shaped more like a wine bottle. Please try it shaped like a BURGUNDY bottle, (AKA Pinot Noir bottle). Also, you still need to write "Vigneron Specialty Products" instead of "Vigneron Special Products" and it should all be bold, bright and very easy to read. We understand that too many "names" and words will be distracting, but want to see how the various samples look, and what we want to go with. The two bottles in the "background" are great. The left bottle represents a Vodka, etc., type Spirits bottle, the Olive Oil curved bottle on the far right, is perfect. Please try a brighter, bolder green outline on them too. Once the front bottle is shaped more like a traditional burgundy wine bottle and ALL the lettering is bright and bold and correct, it should be outstanding. Thank you.
#48, this is awesome. We'd like to see it with XpressFill all the same color, perhaps ALL burgundy with "Specialty Products" in a darker green (?) where it is in this rendition. Also, please add "streams" flowing into the bottles from above, like a straw sized flow of liquid pouring in, not a dotted line. It should start above the bottles, as though someone is pouring from a larger container into the bottles. I hope that makes sense. There are some other Designer's graphics here, other renditions, that have that look. Let's play around with that idea, OK? This is really great. The wording layout and inclusion of our tag line is really good, best so far. We're anxious to see some fine tuning with it. Thanks!
#48 I like the lettering, the colors are good. Please capitalize the V S and P on Vigneron Specialty Products, and do not leave a space in XpressFill. The stream needs to look like the graphic similar to what "Artistic" Designer did - more straw-like and flowing into ALL 3 bottles simultaneously..
#56 This is great, definitely close. Please make the liquid pouring into the bottle more of a straight stream, not quite such a light flow. The bottle fillers fill rather forcefully (but not TOO forcefully, it's a fine balance), so it should look like the bottles would be filled more quickly. Really like the lettering style. We are interested in seeing what colors might look better in the bottle on the left, rather than making it "clear". Can you please try a light mint green, a very light blue, a light peach and whatever other colors might look like a Distilled Spirit or something similar? Thanks!
#70 YES, and as I wrote before, we are interested in seeing what colors might look better in the bottle on the left, rather than making it "clear". Can you please try a light mint green, a very light blue, a shade of peach and whatever other colors might look like a (flavored) Distilled Spirit or something similar? Also, please make the gold in the Olive Oil bottle a brighter and darker gold.
#72 - No this is NOT what we had in mind. Keep the outline of the bottles the same green you had previously. We want a solid, not graduated color for the gold- a deeper, darker gold. We want to see a DIFFERENT color in the "clear" bottle, not a different color outline of the bottle. The liquid IN the bottle is what we are talking about. I'm afraid we won't get what we really are looking for in time, we are at the end of the contest here. I am again copying what I have written the past two times on feedback: "We are interested in seeing what colors might look better in the bottle on the left, rather than making it "clear". Can you please try a light mint green, a very light blue, a light peach and whatever other colors might look like a Distilled Spirit or something similar?" Distilled spirits come in many different colors, such as what I mention above. Please, please. please try this in about 5 renditions (or more) so we can see how it looks with all the different colors. #70 is really close to what we want, only change the color INSIDE the far left bottle. Thanks.