We ranked Entry #64 in the top 5. Entry 77 is strong but not right for our mission.
For Entry #64 – Let's do the following.
1) Give the object above "View Park" a little more angle. Make the center of the curve less thick. 2) Try a more modern font, like Gotham or Avenir, and let's see what it looks like. 3) Play with the kerning a bit. 4) Also, work on the leading between View Park and Conservancy. They are too close together. 5) Color – We need a less bold green. Something lighter.