Hi Lindsey. Thanks for your entries. I like #204 and #205 the best. The parallel lines in the v and i are a nice touch. I'm not a fan of the circles in #203 and #202, and the font is too circular (b and e).
In #204 I don't like 'commerce' on a slant, although it makes sense why you did it... just feels odd to me.I would like to see #205 have the herringbone 'vibes' removed and then have something unique applied to the design to make it fresh... whether that is changing letter height, adding a design element, etc - something to bring it from clean (but mundane) to engaging.
I do like the golden color you used though.