Thank you for your suggestions. It took some time, but I redid the masks and gave the whole logo a much more sophisticated look and feel. Please do tell me, if you need to see anything else.
I just wanted to add a little description of why I did what I do.
I have decided to put accent on Vero Beach, because it is a scenic location and the distinctive factor of your business, furthermore, by making it bigger than the rest people can without problem memorize the name and they instantly know the location. Also the masks themselves give the idea of theatre and thus my choice to make Theatre Group smaller.
I have included Est.1958 in a ellipse to give the whole logo more stability, while conveying the graceful nature of the business with the ribbon as you suggested.
Really like this new design! Ok, so a few comments/requests:
1. Would you please change the blue to more of a royal? 2. Would you please brighten the gold more? We would like it to shine. 3. The masks are better, but they are leaning a bit toward beauty and the beast. I think it is the smile/frown lines, maybe shading vs. distinct lines will remove this perception. Please watch the tops of the masks, we do not want to give the impressions of ears, but at the same time, do not want it straight across at the top, if that makes sense. As with the rest of the design, if you could brighten up the gold that would be great.
We love the oval design and the stars at the bottom, PLEASE don't change!!
Thank you for the black and what version. No changes to that, except to say it has to mirror the color version, so any material changes there will, of course, need to go in the B&W one.
NOTE: We have extended the contest to give you (and us) 3 more days. This is our first logotournament and we are worried we will not get all the changes done by Tuesday, so please bear with us! We have a board meeting tonight for the theatre and plan to take designs to them for review. Thank you for all your efforts so far!
Are you completely out of this contest? If not, can we see the changes we sent you? They were:
Really like this new design! Ok, so a few comments/requests:
1. Would you please change the blue to more of a royal? 2. Would you please brighten the gold more? We would like it to shine. 3. The masks are better, but they are leaning a bit toward beauty and the beast. I think it is the smile/frown lines, maybe shading vs. distinct lines will remove this perception. Please watch the tops of the masks, we do not want to give the impressions of ears, but at the same time, do not want it straight across at the top, if that makes sense. As with the rest of the design, if you could brighten up the gold that would be great.
We love the oval design and the stars at the bottom, PLEASE don't change!!
Thank you for the black and what version. No changes to that, except to say it has to mirror the color version, so any material changes there will, of course, need to go in the B&W one.
I had to tend to some personal issues, and thought that it is was a nice coincidence that you extended the contest for a week. I will make the requested changes now.
Would you please make the following changes to number 65:
1. vero beach -SMALLER 2.Theatre Guild LARGER because that`s how we`re known. 3.Masks slightly smaller. 4. eyes turned upside down on the sad mask 5. take out the cheek effect on both masks to see how the face looks without them.
The were a lot of small changes that went away from what we liked. Can you change number 64 to remove only the smile lines on the masks. Do not change the eyes on the tragedy. Do not move the position or size of the masks.
Only other change is one is to make Theatre Guild bigger and use the font you used in 70
Please don't change any shading, any gold color, don't change he shape of the oval
Ok we ranked 72 and 64 next to each other. If you can make the gold on the oval outline and Vero beach theatre guild as bright in 72 as it is in 64, we will be done.
The dark highlights in the oval and the white in the Vero beach theatre guild is what we are trying to get rid of. We understand you are trying for the shading affect, but we are looking for bright gold everywhere there is gold. Also cal the vet beach go rim to Tim on the oval without changing the size of the theatre guild or the masks?
However, the second part of your request is meaningless to me "Also cal the vet beach go rim to Tim" - This is what I understand - Also Call vet (as in veterinary) the beach go rim (as in edge) to Tim? Who is Tim?
Ok the gold is now there. Sorry, for the confusing message above. Needless to say, that is not what i typed. What I asked was: can the Vero Beach go to the rim of the oval (touching the rim) without changing the size of the theatre guild or the size of the masks?