Put stars before and after the US College and Recruiting.com. Make the Recruiting.com ribbon bigger to make the font size same as US College, it's all one in the domain. If you need to move the ribbon up a little bit, you can. Make the ribbon with some gradient to add a 3d'ish effect, the white ends of the fold of the ribbon blend in and are lost. Make the outside circle a dark gold or bronze color. Also here are a could other suggestions:
On #129 can you make the text (Connecting Athletes & Colleges) larger text so it will maybe go the full legnth of the ribbon and please make the ribbon darker less flare through out the design. It seems to light and we want the design to stand out. We like the silver/grey sheild but everything else seems to fade into the sheild. Also give me another example of the same design but make the stars at top a dark Gold or Bronze. Please make the outline of the center ring a darker gold or bronze make it enhance the center
On #128 conform the words (Connecting Athletes & Colleges) along the top surface of the sheild in Black less flare and more solid color on the banner.
Maybe darken up the silver/grey color on both designs the shield some, it seems to light.
On # 139 make the lettering on the ribbon solid gold to many lite colors and the lettering is blending into the silver. I like the dark grey on the shield trim and ribbon. Give me a diffrent color for the inside color of the shield to much grey/silver maybe a medium blue without flare, make the gold ring in the center stand out more. Add the (Connecting Athletes & Colleges) to the bottom maybe a black color and big enough to read
#141 we can see the lettering at the bottom (Connecting Athletes & Colleges) make it bigger and darker. Im not sure if I like the gold trim with all the red. darken up the red some and use the same gold color as you did in #136, keep the lettering on the ribbon and stars white just cahnge the bottom lettering to stand out more and bigger
On #136 the lettering on the ring is hard to read can you make the ring thicker so the text can be bigger. use a darker blue for the center and the stars all white.
On # 152 make the center a darker blue and on # 150 make the gold trim solid less flair (shiny) on the bottom the lettering is getting lost in the light background
Ok now I like the shade of Blue you used in #154. Now if you can take the same shade of blue and plly it to #136 make all the stars white and make the text on the ring bolder easier to read. we are getting close
On #163 we are still not liking the color of the text on the ring it seems to be blending in to much. Make it on color maybe the same red color you used in #155. KEEP THE RING GOLD
The words Connecting Athletes & Colleges is still getting lost in the design. What do you think on # 155 and 156 making the ribbon higher and put the text at the bottom of the ribbon in white.
do the same on #154 make the ribbon higher and add Connecting Athletes & Colleges in the same gold text color. Or give me something where its not getting lost at the bottom
Hi Bart, Thanks for the opportunity to work with you. If you need any revison just remember: only the #1 ranked designer can submit entries during judging mode, you can re-arranje how many times you want.