The right idea - but put the line under the word URBANE and add the word MAN underneath that line. Also, experiment with different fonts. I like the wider, flatter look of this one. Thanks!
FYI: I've contacted waveman777 regarding his submissions -- 80, 79, 78, 77, 50, 42. These all use a "stretched" version of my design, with a slightly different font used for "MAN". In fact, 80 is your second-rank pick.
Unfortunately, if waveman777 doesn't alter his design to not use my design in his submission, I'll be forced to take him to logo court. I hate to have to bring this to your attention, as it's unsavory. But, please realize: when waveman777 took my design and used most of it for his own submission, that was not allowed. I will let you make your own decision as to where his design should be ranked.
I'll be submitting my own variations accordingly. Have a good night!