As i told you, i really like what you do. i like logo - that are happy and interesting . as 166 and i60.
Nevertheless, as i should all logos to people- they adviced me one thing, which i believe is true. The logo cannot be too loaded with small details, because when you print it small- it is unnoticable.
Do you mind trying again? I think the wisest thing will be to try a classic thing. like of the famus brands. it should be clean , simple and elegant. less is more.. (apparently in logos)
my design here represents the curviture of the body. remember michael jacksons' video "the way you make me feel" ...his hand gesture to symbolize the curves of the body ...this is the inspiration of my design #308