I'd also be interested to see what it would look like if you just grabbed the whole rectangular word part in the middle, and just squished it in a very small amount this way --> <-- (so it is not so wide). A very small amount, like 1-2%.
I also think blue text works better than red, because the stars are supposed to be on blue.
But then again, the stripes are supposed to be red (on the real flag).
So could you try an exact copy of this, except the BOTTOM part of the E is red, not the top? I don't know if that will be better or worse, I just want to see it.
Yeah, I think that little shift to the star made a difference!
Thanks for all those variations. I just need to step away for a while. (I've been sitting here for hours replying to almost every submission. I gotta sleep on it.)
thank you for your feedback.
please check my latest revision, i have tried to combine this design with the shield i have :)
if you have any other questions or requests please let me know :)
regards, rumbig
I'd love to see more variations of this layout. This and your other submissions with the shield behind the words are definitely my favorite so far, in terms of layout. I just want to mess around with the details, and try some different color variations (like with the red and blue switched and stuff)
Maybe those gradient parts could be a solid light gray. Maybe they could be solid red or blue. Maybe a solitary white star in that blue part at the top. Maybe 3 stars across instead of just one. Maybe one star down at the bottom. Maybe try turning that "E" into the red stripes of the flag. Or maybe the "U" can be blue on the left side, and red stripes on the right. (See some of the little tricks the other artists are doing with the word united.)
I think you're really close. I am 100% sold on the general layout, just not quite all the way there on the finished product.
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if you have any other questions or requests please let me know :)
thanks
So is the text in this one just a tiny bit taller?
I think I like this a tiny bit better!
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thanks :)
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This one is still the best
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I don't like the outline.
I drew the box on one of my recent comments because I was just trying to show you what section to squish.
I was just trying to say squish United Refinishing a tiny bit this way
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So the letters aren't so wide and flat
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This doesn't work though.
I'm seeing it less like an E now, and more like two separate letters I and E, like UNITIED
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do you like it?
thanks :)
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I wasn't still just talking about the "E" from the comment before.
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Can I see what that would look like?
Vertical line is blue. Horizontal ones are red
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thanks.
regards, rumbig
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I've got like 10 of yours I can't decide between.
I do think I really like this one with the gray line around the shield
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Just like my last request, can you try switching the colors on the E. (Not the position of the shapes, just the color)
Thanks
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Now the E looks more like an S
I think you gave me this one because of what I just asked for a little while ago.
I just meant to switch the colors of the E, not the shapes.
So the thing that looks like a C would be on the bottom, and it would be red. The straight line would be on top, and it would be blue.
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I also think blue text works better than red, because the stars are supposed to be on blue.
But then again, the stripes are supposed to be red (on the real flag).
So could you try an exact copy of this, except the BOTTOM part of the E is red, not the top? I don't know if that will be better or worse, I just want to see it.
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The "D" especially looks better. I didn't like that fat, squished D.
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ok i am waiting for more good news from you :)
regards, rumbig
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Thanks for all those variations. I just need to step away for a while. (I've been sitting here for hours replying to almost every submission. I gotta sleep on it.)
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please check my latest revision, i have tried to combine this design with the shield i have :)
if you have any other questions or requests please let me know :)
regards, rumbig
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I think the star in the D just isn't quite right though, by a very VERY tiny bit.
I feel like it needs to be like 1% smaller, and like 1 pixel to the left and 1 pixel up.
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The ones with the shield have totally normal text.
I'd love to see the shield behind it with these little edits to the "E" and the "D"
If this design and your shield designs got married and had a baby, that could be the winner.
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I don't think I want any gradients in it though.
I'd love to see more variations of this layout. This and your other submissions with the shield behind the words are definitely my favorite so far, in terms of layout. I just want to mess around with the details, and try some different color variations (like with the red and blue switched and stuff)
Maybe those gradient parts could be a solid light gray. Maybe they could be solid red or blue. Maybe a solitary white star in that blue part at the top. Maybe 3 stars across instead of just one. Maybe one star down at the bottom. Maybe try turning that "E" into the red stripes of the flag. Or maybe the "U" can be blue on the left side, and red stripes on the right. (See some of the little tricks the other artists are doing with the word united.)
I think you're really close. I am 100% sold on the general layout, just not quite all the way there on the finished product.
Thanks!