Thanks for listening to my suggestions, but I still don't like the "refinishing" part.
That was a clever idea, but all that back and forth red white red white red white, it plays tricks with your eyes. It makes me dizzy or like I'm being hypnotized or something.
I think the stripes at the bottom are too thin, and the way "refinishing" is hidden in there among those skinny stripes doesn't quite work.
Maybe fatter stripes and less of them?
And maybe no arch to the word United, and the word Refinishing right below it, so its not mixed in the with the stripes?
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That was a clever idea, but all that back and forth red white red white red white, it plays tricks with your eyes. It makes me dizzy or like I'm being hypnotized or something.
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i have revised it, please check my design entry #109
best regards :)
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I think the stripes at the bottom are too thin, and the way "refinishing" is hidden in there among those skinny stripes doesn't quite work.
Maybe fatter stripes and less of them?
And maybe no arch to the word United, and the word Refinishing right below it, so its not mixed in the with the stripes?
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