Good job. I like the concept, but the execution is a little off.
I like the simplicity.
I don't like how the stripes are different thicknesses, the star is too low in the "D," the left point of the star is higher than the right one. That whole area from the E into the D just has a lot of imperfections.
The whole thing is also just a little too wide and flat for me. If you stretched it a little bit vertically, I'd like the proportions better. That might also allow you to have equal thickness stripes, and give the star inside the D some room to breathe
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The star is centered, which is great.
And I like the shape of the shield better, which is also great.
But there's a thin white stripe attached directly above the right arm of the star. So the right arm looks slightly higher and fatter.
And the idea of the E flag and the star part of the T was clever. It just doesn't quite work. I don't really have the words to better explain why.
I don't know if it's an optical illusion, or if the star is not centered. It looks like it's too far left
I like the simplicity.
I don't like how the stripes are different thicknesses, the star is too low in the "D," the left point of the star is higher than the right one. That whole area from the E into the D just has a lot of imperfections.
The whole thing is also just a little too wide and flat for me. If you stretched it a little bit vertically, I'd like the proportions better. That might also allow you to have equal thickness stripes, and give the star inside the D some room to breathe