I made a couple of design alternatives for you to check.
I changed the position of the swash of the letter 'y' or to lower down it to start from its loop at
#186 and scale its width since I think the it will add more unity to the two words in overall look. Also that I added swashes for the first letter 'T' in 'Twenty', first S and the last s letters in the word: 'Somethings' for the same reason.
As for the alternative
#187 ~ the swash for the letter 'y' is simplified, and that the 'T' appeared without any additional swash in the word: 'Twenty'. In this alternative, I'd like to present something that is much simpler, still with swashes but without overdoing it, to see if that works.
Feel free to drop another feedback or any comments!