this is a minor issue. in viewing the curvey line from an embroidery stand point, perhaps a gradient will not be successful. Is it possible to have the same line that switches between the three main colors, blue - purple-pink so that only 3 thread colors will be necessary there and all 3 would have a distinct start and end point within 1 contiguous line? Otherwise, perhaps the swervy line is silver like Tru.
I liked the idea of the butterfly northern lights but really, #169 is so cool. I did see you used a thinner font but this bold light grey/silver is so compelling, especially as I expect to silver foil the word truth when I get letterhead, biz cards, and embroidery (silver thread)
I know I pulled this out because I'm focusing on the white ones, but I do love how you made the bars more visible...can't tell if it's bolder color or thicker lines. Right now I'm focusing on #156
This is great along with #155 which I think are the reverse of each other?
I'd like to eliminate the colors to the right of the center vertical bar and do the whole spectrum in only the colors to the left of the center/highest bar...either by extending it all the way across, mirroring it, or repeating it. In other words, the shapes and such don't change, but they only use the colors that appear from the center to the left.
Also, can you line the bottom of the vertical bars with a ribbon like #84 that uses the same color pattern/gradient as the bars?
Excellent. On another one of yours I talked about the crown shape. On here, I think the old bottom was better, but perhaps the 3 tringular peaks can be composed by the tops of the northern light bars instead of the kind of indentation at the bottom. In other words, the top of the northern lights forms a kind of 3 pointed masculine crown, while the bottom can be lightly convex or have that wavy bottom in the other non-crown rendition that you've been nailing.
The northern lights here kind of reminds me of a tiara. So, with that in mind, still using the vertical bars, is it possible for the overall pattern of the northern lights to form a crown shape. Still use gradient, but since it already looks like a tiara, can it look shape-wise more masculine - king-ish.
I love the 2-tone text and the abstract northern lights. I think the northern lights are bit too pastel.
Also, I like the horizontal gradient of the northern lights vertical bars but wonder if removing the vertical gradient within the bars themselves could work. The purpose of that would be to allow for the embroidered version of this to be practical when 1 kind of thread is used per vertical bar.
can I see this with white background?
More variety of colors in the northern lights?
Tru and North separated by a different color?
Possibly not block caps on TRUNORTH
I like the pattern of lines to resemble the northern lights. I could see removing the cross and going with the text and the lines as a logo in and of themselves.
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I'd like to eliminate the colors to the right of the center vertical bar and do the whole spectrum in only the colors to the left of the center/highest bar...either by extending it all the way across, mirroring it, or repeating it. In other words, the shapes and such don't change, but they only use the colors that appear from the center to the left.
Also, can you line the bottom of the vertical bars with a ribbon like #84 that uses the same color pattern/gradient as the bars?
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Each bar having its own single color.
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Also, I like the horizontal gradient of the northern lights vertical bars but wonder if removing the vertical gradient within the bars themselves could work. The purpose of that would be to allow for the embroidered version of this to be practical when 1 kind of thread is used per vertical bar.
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More variety of colors in the northern lights?
Tru and North separated by a different color?
Possibly not block caps on TRUNORTH
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