I love this concept..the colors are wonderful and gorgeous, but possibley looks a little fake, and we are all about real food in nature...so possibly work on the color combos with a little more grown up feel, and see how that looks. I think it could be just the right mix of play, nature, and gourmet!
# 31...Really loving the colors and the graphics! They are great! Can we make the font smaller so that people may see the pic better and give them an idea of a great dessert?
#34...the same thing! I love love the colors and the graphics and if we can make the "Truly Raw Goumet" smaller so that people can see the lovely pic....can we also add the word "Sorbet"...so that there is a distinction between sorbet and ice cream
dear contest holder thank you for the feedback here are revised entries: #37 #38 #39 #40 #41#42 I hope you like them please let me know if you need any modifications. kind regards Tzina - lotus creative
dear contest holder thank you for the rank here is a revised entry with more breathing room between the letters: #47 please let me know if you have any further suggestions kind regards Tzina - lotus creative
on #77 and others they are very beautiful and artsy, too feminine and like "little kid" colorful. Can you try something completely different. More elegant while playful. Color is ok, but it needs to look ok on a small image on a 9oz jar, which is our packaging. Maybe even use a bee or something. Go outside the box, don't feel tied to coconuts or sorbet, more get the impression of what we do. Simplify please.
dear contest holder here are updated entries in which the design can be applied as a logo and as a label also #90 #91 #92 #93 #94 the choice of the font is calligraphy brush stroke and in which I have applied custom lines in order to promote the impression that it is handwritten and unique as your products are handmade and unique also. If you have a certain direction that you would like me to follow, please feel free to contact me kind regards Tzina - lotus creative