#9 Something happened when the font was changed from a dark to a light color. It became fuzzy somehow. Whatever you did to "Brewing Company", it helped. Maybe the other parts need that too.
Part of the fuzziness is the small screen captures. The logo has a light color with a couple darker colors behind it that are offset. I'll alter that. One thing that concerns me is that most of the entries appear to be more like labels than logos. That's why I'm trying to make mine as clean as possible. If you want to reproduce the logo on many substrates you'll probably prefer one that you won't have to do in full color. That's why I submitted the first one. Easy to use in one color applications such as embroidery on hats or shirts. I'll submit some other variations.