travel_companyLogo Design Contest

version 1 simple and fresh

(This comment references Entry #4)

#5,6,8,9 try to remove this thick black outline from text
Also dont like too much color and no that yellow-green please. The best is so far 6 and 8 but.

the design is too calm. it has to be more vivid, thrilled and fast. It has to remind on some adventure and fun

#22 relly good, yours best so far, try to design a foam of stern wave somehow in this picture, or change the wave structure in #22 like more stern wave.

Although, really good it is in top designs

#22 Try to work on a txt font. Also on highness of letters - maybe beginning letters should be bigger

Excellent! Combination with the sun is great it gives a calm "line" into logo

Please note: .com is MANDATORY - try to fit it somewhere in the logo well!

Try few more examples by removing that black line below the words - or put in a different color, some other dark blue color

Try to work on birds on some other combinations (maybe more dynamic or more calm)

Would like to see how the sun would look if you put brighter colors.

Try to make combination with more dynamic wave

Excellent work by the way....

Also Would like to have example of the same drawing (bottom of drawing - slight color and wave details) #23 in style of #24

required changes #23 in style of #24

(This comment references Entry #27)

Excellent, love that black line is not completely black any more.

Try combining those suns with different samples you made already, and try to add some more samples please. I like it very much

Don't forget to include .COM in logo - that is MANDATORY

@ your post - required changes #23 in style of #24 - I meant on opposite - to put the sun with birds from #24 to sample of #23

small changes added to the waves
I can always make it exactly as 23 if you want me to


(This comment references Entry #28)

Great!

But I still don't see that you implemented .com

You have to fit in .com somewhere on the logo somehow - it is really necessary

.com can be really small, but must be see-able and recognizable

#28 Try also to add another darker blue color on the line you removed (the black line - do not remove it completely now) - to see how it looks like that also

#28 Also, remove the lowest small curve of wave that begins on letter K and ends on letter N (in the end of letter N - beginning of letter G) - let's see how it looks like that also.

... and don't forget to add .com in the logo somewhere suitable!!! - doesn't have to be big, can be really small - try to make it smallest possible but still recognizable and see-able. Maybe in continuation of the wave that curves after the text, or somewhere above the text - suitable.

please make one more combination of sun and text - water and birds from #28 and sun from #26, + .com (smallest possible but still recognizable and see-able) somewhere, maybe above the end of text, or in continuation with the wave that is curving (but design it small) - want to see both combination's

Make one more water combination as described before:

March 30th, 2010, 9:22pm
#28 Try also to add another darker blue color on the line you removed (the black line - do not remove it completely now) - to see how it looks like that also

#28 Also, remove the lowest small curve of wave that begins on letter K and ends on letter N (in the end of letter N - beginning of letter G) - let's see how it looks like that also.

Please, make more sun color combination's - try to add more red or yellow-red, orange-yellow (darker & lighter) .... - would like to see as much sun color combination's as you can provide!!!!

Please make these efforts described in last 4 posts.

will be done....

.com - smallest possible but still recognizable and see-able

.com will be readable of cource

Have seen the first version, try to design .com even smaller then that.

Don't forget all the sun combination's and all described before in last posts as well as the sun from #26

this is the smallest possible yet readable .com

(This comment references Entry #36)

sun from #26 added to last version
mor contrast added to .com for better readability

(This comment references Entry #37)

water and birds from #28 and sun from #26, + .com
#28 without the small wave

(This comment references Entry #38)

try combining more red in the sun (something between #34, #35 & #36)
try more examples with various positions of .com (including red too)
you dont have to work with those multiple birds no more

ok

Also, provide all these last examples without the line below the words (black and blue line in previous samples)

+ more combination's of sun colors

Try also combining water from #26

pleaase provide the numbers of entries which you want to see without the line again

one is enough just to see how it looks
#40 is now too red.. i like the combination that red ends in .com but please try to make it little more like #34 (thinner, or less noticable, maybe with more white in the middle but not too much).
as i said before, something beetween #34 and #35

thanks very much for the effort

ok ,will be done
just a little busy with some tri-folds which I have to print out today
..will get the revisions done as soon as i am back from the printshop(soon)

improved red of #40 ;line removed

(This comment references Entry #47)

same + water of #26

(This comment references Entry #48)

Very nice, excellent!

Now in both cases #47 and #48 put .com in 3 ways:

1. combination: put .com as dot goes directly above letter I (from word bookings)
2. combination: put .com in continuation of the text on curve of the wave (also use color form of .com from sample #35)

Also, try to make that yellow in the sun more bright like in sample #35 and maybe try to soften these strong colors like in example #39

So, this are 4 samples more...just by changing those details + samples with brighter yellow (orange)

in progress

just to mention that using the dot of the .com for the letter 'i' inevitably makes the .com much bigger
sure you want this?

Right, forget about that

Where I said before on softening colors, i meant also to blur them or some effect like that

brighter sun

(This comment references Entry #55)

Great!

Please @ #38 make .com in color of the sun - to see how would that be.

that would be hard to see
the small size of the letters demands contrast to make them readable
but if you insist I will show it to you

@ #38 Yes, thank you, take the color from the borders of the sun in #38 and put it in .com
Maybe you can make the edge lines of the letters .com in really thin blue color and inside as said.

@ #53 try to make the sun through letters on one part or both parts, as in sample #35 or #38

Special request, if you want...

Please, make last effort and make one sample of night vision of that logo - so, instead of the sun, put the moon, remove the birds and maybe change colors of water and text (with some moon reflection) in night suitable form.

Would much appreciate if you try to do it.

Please, make samples with these little detail changings:

@ #38 Yes, thank you, take the color from the borders of the sun in #38 and put it in .com
Maybe you can make the edge lines of the letters .com in really thin blue color and inside as said.

@ #53 try to make the sun through letters on one part or both parts, as in sample #35 or #38

Hi,
thin outline does not work,it has to be a thick outline for the small letters to be seen and you already
said-no thick outlines....
its not a problem to show you what works and even what doesont but first I'd like to mention some things that bother me....first one is extending the contest after demanding so many minor revisions,you may not know that after the contest has ended the 1st ranked designer is still allowed to submit revisions(for a week or so)
I mean isnt it 98% of what you are looking for( why would you otherwise make me do all these changes for)
second thing that bothers me is (probably without any intend) encouraging designers whos concepts are far tooo close to mine - this will only affect their rankings negatively involving them into a logo court
I pretty well undertsand that you cant know everything and this is why I explain
I am ready to work further on your logo but first I'd like you to shear some thoughts on this post
thanks

To see all other ideas, maybe it could be some more brilliant once, and just to get more ideas of how the logo could be made - that's why the contest is for - the main purpose! And maybe if I see another logo I like, also to make a deal with some lower ranked designer and buy his concept to use it for another purposes.

Thx for the question.

Don't hesitate to question anything that bothers you!

outlined .com with sun colour

(This comment references Entry #76)

i have added a slightly darker note in order to achieve the closest readable colour to the suns edge
hope that gives you a better Idea of what I mentioned before about size and contrast

(This comment references Entry #77)

advice: since you want the logo to be vivid I would reccomend going with one of the 'red note' versions

#53 sun trough on the left

(This comment references Entry #81)

I really do like entry #77

Thank you for the advice. But also must look professional & reliable. It will be a discussion for sure about that...

Try to make also those sun extensions mentioned before - that would be my last wish :)

Except, if you're willing also to do the night version.

Thanks again!

Please, make the sun in #55 as in #81 (just the left extension of the sun)