I like: - the idea of the two T's. - the colour blue you used. - the colour grey you used - the type of the letters
I do not like: - the five grey squares - The words Hypotheken & Verzekeringen are too small. Please put the word Hypotheken under TRANS and put the word Verzekeringen under ARANT.
Request: On your profile I saw you have designed a logo for Comergy. (Client rank: 72nd, Comergy) You paint a sort of crystal sphere with something in it. Please use that crystal sphere (to show how Transparent we are). Put "something in it" and use a third color to give the logo more attention.
thanks for the input, and thank you also have to see my profile, the design "comergy" could get to the second rank, while the contest is still going on, but the CH from comergy down with reason, I created a logo that looks very exclusive, and I did not have time to provide alternative Other designs on the contest "comergy", I hope the use of a crystal ball really fit as you want, to give your company image. The following is my second design with a difference in the placement Hypotheken & verzekeringen sentence, at first I had the idea of sign placement "&" as in design # 5, but I'm not putting, and if I now enter a "&" as in design # 5, then I would imitate the composition considered. I hope without the use of signs "& "in sentence Hypotheken & verzekeringen, will not be a problem for you. thanks. I'll wait for your next reply
Thank you for your new designed logo. I really like the crystal ball.
I have some extra comments, I am hoping you will do some extra work.
- please put the crystal ball on top and make it a little bit bigger - use a bit more space in the word TransparanT - make the lettertype a little bit thinner - Please use Hypotheken & Verzekering under Transparant (take more space)
Thank you for your work. I hope to hear from you again.
a good idea to put the crystal ball at the "spa", I have difficulty in placing the sign "&" on line "Hypotheken & verzekeringen", because if I put it under a crystal ball, will feel very far away from the logo, and impressed separated, not seen a single entity with its logo. so I put the words "Hypotheken & verzekeringen" without using the sign "&". I hope the loss of the sign "&" on line "Hypotheken & verzekeringen" not a problem for you, as a visual writing "Hypotheken & verzekeringen" has been separated by the crystal ball. Your input will be greatly appreciated danez
Thanks again for doing this great work. It gives the perfect illusion of transparency. Well done! Now I am for 99% satisfied. That only 1% are the words Hypotheken & Verzekeringen. Now they have a different size. I understand what the problem is by sinking the letters. But I hope you find a better solution.
Thanks again for creating such a nice logo and nice illusion.
hi.. I have a new layout, for the placement writing "Hypotheken & verzekeringen", I hope to make it 100%, hahaha ...... :), Sorry I thought it was not this something funny, but I am pleased with our conversation, your message made me smile before. owh ... yeah .. I have read your last message, it's up to you .., thanks.....
for this design, the size of the letters "Hypotheken & Verzekeringe" has been equated, please compare it back, for the phrase "Verzekeringe" Squeeze a little, because the number of letters for more. There are things I want to ask, in your last message, but I'll send it via PM thanks..:) danez