#41 Like the overall design concept. Concerned that the detail on the globe will get lost when logo used on printed letterhead.
#43 Also like overall design concept, but not the skull. We generally don't focus too much attention on the "toxics" aspect. Could you introduce other types of packaging - glass bottle, can, plastic bag - instead of skull? Or "TPCH" since many know our organization by this acronym.
46- can you try moving the bottle off center & add another lid to the box (see #45)? Also what about playing around with the colors, e.g., making bottle and lettering brown/brownish red? Any coloring ideas you have would be great to try -- no need to stick with green & blues!
#113 - we really like the addition of the map. You can see this is our top pick. Could you try to put 3 different types of packaging in the box - a bottle, a can and a bag.
We want to try some slight variations of 2 designs. Please do each bullet separately.
#147 a) remove vertical stripes on globe b) a + make globe slightly larger c) b + make box and text a dark blue
#135 a) move the map slightly down, but not as far down as #136 b) without map in background c) can you use a more simplified map (e.g., only major continents to eliminate some of the smallest details) d) make the handle of the bag more visible, like in #127 e) d + dark blue box and text f) experiment with bag to make it look more like plastic bag (not paper bag) - e.g., yellow, more rounded
Your design is our top choice. We just need to play around with some of the details to get it right, including the placement of the world map and the bag. We'd like to see the following variations:
#155 - map a little larger, like 135, then the following: - angle the bag more like 135 - angle the bag & make bag white - angle the bag & make bag light brown
#135 & #155 - for both designs submit revisions with - world map lower than 135, but higher than 155 - make "TPCH" on box white (like 158) & put a little more space between P & C
#135 - make border around box flaps thinner OR remove white borders
#156 - flaps on the box open more (so looks less like wings) - flaps on the box smaller (so looks less like wings)
We are close. Definitely decided on: - brown bag, but have not decided which bag design - white letters on box - placement of map on #169
Undecided: 1) flat map or globe as background 2) which brown bag
New requests, most to see variations on map and brown bag: 1) #169 can you make the "T" in the box slightly larger; it appears smaller than other letters
2) if #1 looks good, then use this design for the following 2a) use box from #169 with globe from #152 2b) use box from #169 and add bag from #135 2c) 2b + globe from #152
3) separate request from above: #169 - make the box flaps a little shorter (I think the scale is a little off on them, if you folded them they would be too long so want to see if it makes a difference
One other comment/question. We have a slight preference for the "rounded" brown bag. However, the "rounded" bag does not print as well as the squared bag - in either color or grayscale. We will be using the logo for both our website and letterhead. Is there something you can do so that the "rounded" bag prints out better?
Like the new letter T. Like more open box flaps with globe design. Do not like new brown bag.
We are trying to decide between 4 designs (with different map and different style brown bag). Need some small changes for each before deciding. These are all separate requests. 1) #169 - make change to "T" like in #172. Should "P" be just a tiny bit longer? 2) #169 (as revised in #1 above) - with brown bag in #135 3) #172 - can you slightly tip bottle so it doesn't seem to be in center of globe. Also try another design with bottle straight up and down, but a little to the right 4) new design - #169 box (as revised above) with globe as background
Congratulations and thank you for working with us!
When you finalize the design would you make sure that all the letters in "TPCH" are the same height? The "TP" looks a little bit shorter in the final design (#197).