1. Please make the river blue and show it coming from the mountain. 2. Make the village a different color to make it stand out more and maybe bigger. 3. Please remember that this will have to be readable in a small size (business card logo) and in black and white.
1. Overall, it looks very nice, please keep the stream/ocean like that, it is beautiful. Please try to make the mountains less "realistic". They should be more basic/abstract without much shading. Maybe also try to separate the two mountains with a white line. 2. The houses look nice, but the village should be more condensed, try to create one or two smaller village "clusters". Shade them in a way that they will still be visible when printed in black and white. 3. Make the text smaller to fit the width of the graphic. Also it should not be bold, but thin.
Thanks for your great work, I look forward to seeing more over the weekend!
Hi, it looks nice but the houses are very small. At a small size, it is hard to see the village. Try to make it more visible. Also, the mountains should still be more abstract as I explained. Thanks.