I really like your designs, but will have to see what my boss thinks about the grid thing. I am meeting with him in 2 hours to review. Maybe try making one just like #82 (nice mountains there), but instead of the grid/dots on the left, keep it looking normal (green, no grid) and try to add a small settlement. See my attached jpeg in the contest brief for that. I know my boss won't like #73 because it is just a house. We aren't trying to show one house, but a community. Thanks!
just met with the boss. He LOVES your mountains in #82, but the modern grid style doesn't work (great idea though). Please make the left side look like the right side (green), make the river narrower (it should be a stream) and add a village on left side of river. The font should be more sans serif style, like Calibri. Thanks, I look forward to seeing more!
1. Your artwork is very nice, but it will be hard to read in a small size (like business card) because of the intricate detail and colors. 2. Try to separate the mountains in some way (maybe white lines) 3. Remove the plants and make the village on the left bigger and more noticeable. You may want to make the mountains as an outline instead of all green to make the village stand out. 4. Try to keep in mind that this will have to look good small (business card) as well as in black and white.