Townscape, Inc.Logo Design Contest

Hi, I like #44. Maybe you could remove the TSI (we changed our mind about that) and just show the stream in blue, with a little village or farm on the side of the stream. Your other designs look too alpine (snowy). Maybe change #43 to be green with a blue stream coming off the mountain and a village/farm. We will be reviewing designs with our boss in 4-5 hours. Thanks!

Thank you, please check new revision above.

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Hi,

my boss likes your #44 and #57 designs. Here are the comments:

For #44, we really like the mountains because they aren't shaded. Try just updating that exact graphic and removing the T and I and making the stream blue. You may have to change the size of the mountains and stream to fit since the T and I will be gone, but play with it. We really like the simple line mountains in this one.

For #57, remove the blue line about TOWNSCAPE, make the stream blue and add a little village. This should not be actual houses, but just some dots and lines to suggest (kind of like from an airplane). I have attached an air photo to the contest brief to show you what we mean.

The rest of your designs, the boss didn't like the S as the river, but you could try playing with that some more, I like the mountains.

We will review again with the boss in 5 hours. Thanks for your great work!

#84 revision one, line mountain, still work on other your request.

Thanks, #84 looks nice. Can you please use a different font for that (same one as in 57) and also add a village on the left side of the river. Thanks, great job!

updated.

Hi,

thanks for the update. Please try to make it look more "serious" (no grass huts or palm trees) and make it visible. Here is more what we are thinking or check out what others have done. You don't need to put roads, but dots and lines that look like a settlement. Thanks!

http://www.boardofwatersupply.com/cssweb/display.cfm?sid=2177

The font is nice in #86, just try to make it more like a cluster village settlement. Try to use browns or gray shades. Thanks!

This is your request, hopefully pleased.

#89

Thanks, looks good, I will show my boss tomorrow. The brown was only meant for the village, please keep the mountains green!

change the colors #91

Hi,

thanks, we love #91 in general. My boss thinks the village is too abstract. The #104 village looks too much like a map. Maybe work on #91 some more and try to make the village look just a little more "real", maybe with some lines and rooftops. And try to leave a little more space between the village and the river. This design will have to look good small (on our business card) and also in black and white. Otherwise, very nice, thanks for your great work!

Hi,

congratulations, you made it to the Top 5 phase!

I look forward to seeing more revisions over the weekend! Thanks!

updated

#134 looks good. Try to give the village more of a "pattern". Like your #91 design has a nice settlement pattern, it just looks to abstract. Try to find something in between. Right now in #134 it just looks like evenly spaced houses.

Hi,

my boss likes #139 a lot. Try to post a few versions with a smaller village. Just reduce the size of the village by removing some of house areas. Also, put the "INC" underneath the Townscape. Thanks!

glad to hear that, but during judging mode only the 1st ranked designer will be able to submit entries.
could you please give me chance to submit the revision?

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Please check your request above, and let me know if you have any request or revision.

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Thanks. We donʻt need the one with the black background. For the other two, I like the reduction in the houses. Please also reduce the size of the brown pattern underneath the houses accordingly. For the text, please remove the line and put the INC at the end of the word Townscape, instead of the center. Thanks! We will move the #1 rank around over the next few days to let everyone do revisions, so if my boss needs anything more from you, I will be sure to put you back in the #1 rank. Thanks!

Please reduce the size of the individual brown patches under the houses. And the INC should not be sideways, but underneath the Townscape. Thanks!

Reduce the patches and INC underneath. #159

Hi,

my boss still likes your #139 best. Please see the pdf below for an example of what the changes should look like. Donʻt change the size of the houses, just make the overall village smaller (it should cover less space). Also remove that extra stream and make the other revisions listed. Thanks!

http://townscapeinc.com/honblue.asp

This is your request #165.

Hi,

thanks for the revision. My boss is pretty picky :)
Here are his comments:

1. I really like the mountains.
2. Move the left side village down right up to the ocean. Remove the single hillside house from the right side village.
3. Change the background village shading (currently brown) to the same light green shading you have in the mountains.
4. Change the font to the same font and size you used in #104. Make the font the same color as you did in #155.

Thanks!

the revision already done, but i can't submit?

Thanks, please check your request entry #166, 167.

Thanks, very nice. We like #166 (with the ocean). My boss is asking if you can make the green village background more visible. Try reducing the transparency or just pick a lighter shade of green with no transparency. Thanks!

green village background #168

Thanks, my boss loves it, he likes your mountains best. No further comments at the moment, maybe tomorrow. We will pick a winner on Friday. Thanks so much for your hard work!

Hi,

in #168, can you add a few more houses to the green background please? Leave the houses and the background green the same size, just add a few more extra houses so the village looks more "dense". Leave everything else the same. Thanks!

work on it, but still can't submit during judging.

This is your request #179, hopefully pleased.