I really like your design, but will have to see what my boss thinks. We are meeting with him in 5 hours. If you could post another one that is the same, but without the petroglyphs please. Change the color of the mountains to a different color, like a dark green. Instead of the petroglyphs, please add some dots and lines to suggest a village, similar to what you see from an airplane. No actual houses, but just a pattern. See the air photo I attached to the contest brief. Nice work, I look forward to seeing more!
my boss had similar comments. He loved the shape of the mountains (but please change to dark green). He also said the following:
1. Please make the river much thinner, it should be a stream. But the shape is nice. Instead of texture for the water, use a blue shading (the texture lines won't be visible on our business card) 2. Remove all petroglyphs (he changed his mind about that) 3. Change the shape of the green area to something different (maybe )wider and instead of the petrogyphs, add a village. Use brown shades or other colors to make the village "pop out" 4. Change the font to something more like Calibri (sans serif) and make it smaller
I've made the changes as you requested, but I can not upload files because your contest entered Top 5 Phase, only first 5 designer can submit design. Can rerank for a while, just to see the changes I have done?