Please add more space between text ENVISION and Yountville (Yountville lower). Replace the roofline between trees (make darker green in foreground - more oak-like) w/ hillside, some w/ row crops in (subtle) colors other than green (simulate grape rows). Hills in background lighter green.
More like my concept, but we're back to text primarily and minimal graphics- no roofs, no hills (was too much like Town's current logo- avoid the similarities
I like the previous version better. Light green and dark greens are nice contrast. Red on roof should be more pastel like tan or putty. Please take a look at the last scan on the Contest page. It's crude, but may give a better idea of what I suggest.
This is good! Too much green, tho. Consider changing roof color (slate, terra cotta?). Add crop rows (golden?) at base of dark green (near) hill. Maybe fluffy white cloud w/ light blue sky on either side (no outline).Trees should be pulled in a bit (don't project beyond the 'E' in Yountville). STILL need to swap ENVISION Yountville (1st line large) w/ Town of Yountville (2nd line small). Other than that, Great!
Need ENVISION Yountville (large) over Town of Yountville (small) under. Remove trees on right, add more space between trees left and rooftops. Add low hills in background.
Better, but Envision Yountville is the primary message. Less development orientation. Maybe rooftops smaller and offset right w/ hillsides/ trees/open space left.
Main message is Envision Yountville. Town of Yountville should be less prominent. Add graphic that conveys small town/village w/ hills, cultivated fields in background. View corridors are important to the town image.
Main message is Envision Yountville. Town of Yountville should be less prominent. Add graphic that conveys small town/village w/ hills, cultivated fields in background. View corridors are important to the town image.
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Thank You!
Fazwork
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Regards,
Fazwork
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Thank You!
Fazwork
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Thanks for feedback, please don't share our idea on contest page, because it's blind phase (Designers cannot see entries)
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Thanks for understanding,
Fazwork
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