TitleMineLogo Design Contest

Hi Sir.. Thank you for bringing my design this far and making me one of the finalists in your contest :)
You can check some of my design revisions, if there are still shortcomings please give me more direction, so that I can make the revisions well and according to your wishes

best regards

Ok Sir,
i have revised it, please check my design entry #422 #424 #425 #427

Thanks :)
regards

Ok Sir,
i have revised it, please check my design entry #423 #426

Thanks :)
regards

Similar comments and requests for this concept as the other we commented on.

Thank you for the revision. We like this one a lot. Can you please try a couple other color combinations? Also, can you place the tag line under the logo in a version or in a position that it might be associated with the logo? Thank you.

is this what you mean sir?
if there are still shortcomings in my design, you can give me feedback again. so that I can make revisions properly and correctly

thanks :)
regards

thank you sir for your feedback :)
i have revised it, please check my design entry #98 #99

regards

Darker meaning less bright. We are trying to avoid looking like the university of West Virginia or university of Colorado at boulder colors and logo

Can we try some other colors with this original set up and the new variations - maybe a lighter blue or blue grey with a darker gold or yellow color?

Thank you for the submission - I like the concept a lot, but do want the words together. Can you please make a version with the Mine moved next to Title, and the yellow bit empty and smaller on the right still separated by the pick shape?