A few things I feel may have been miscommunicated are; my industry - I selected 'Education' since there were no really good options. If I had to make one, I would select 'Blogging' or 'Internet' as this logo will be used for a blog website. The focus of the website is to educate and share knowledge, which is why I picked Education originally, but really I should have selected 'Internet' or, more specifically 'Blogging' as my industry.
Being said, I do like the pencil tip on the T. Could we keep that grey, but move that to the T at the start of Timmy?
Next, can we use a font that is more thick/bold? I feel like the spaces in between the lines of the letters is too big.
Finally, can we add the slogan, 'Breaking bad habits, getting fit, and squeezing the most out of life.' to the logo, in a smaller font?
I really like entry #2, but the 'y' in 'Timmy' and the 'B' in 'Burns' need to be changed. I realize that they are more symmetrical as they look in the current #2 entry, but I dislike this look.
Could you please remove the tall upper right arm of the 'y' in 'Timmy' and the tail on the 'B' in 'Burns'?
Then, if you could add the pencil tip as you had it on the 'T' in entry #1 that'd be great
Finally, if you could add the slogan to the bottom of the logo please!