Hi, I've posted the revisions you requested, and I've tried out some variations in black on white or white on black -- and also green on black with the rectangle. I'm not an expert in screenprinting specifically (I have lots of experience with web and traditional print, but very little experience with apparel), but I asked a friend who is an expert. He said this design could be done in a solid color (or a solid color with halftones to show the variations in tint on the lettering in #28 or
#55). #28 or
#55 would require two screens for the two-color design. But if you go with solid on a T-shirt, you'd be looking at one screen if you print in black or green on a white T-shirt, but likely about 4 screens if you print in white on black (which really has nothing to do with the design and everything to do with printing white on black). The more screens, the higher the cost. Of course, this is all if you go with silkscreened shirts. There are other methods of printing shirts, and there's embroidery, though silkscreening is supposedly the highest quality if you're printing apparel. I'm happy to keep working if you have any requests (or if I get hit with some more inspiration!).