Thrive In Line ChiropracticLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the submission sunardi. In #26, I like how the "E" underlines the "IN LINE" but I think that "in line" is too separated from "Thrive". I would love to see some text that is slanted also.

Hi superhawk,

Thank you for your quick feedback.
Yes, I think you're right about the separated space. That's why I made the swoosh above the "THRIVE" to make it feel right. I'm still a little worried about this too, actually. So, here some revisions as you asked for it. #40 and #41.

I'll be glad to hear your further feedback on these.
Thanks,
Sunardi

I like the slanted text and that the top of all the text is level now too. Looks much more fluid. Not sure how I feel about the swoosh over thrive, but I like the idea of something being there.

Thanks!

My new revisions that I think more balance on the tagline.
#54 #55.

Thanks!
Sunardi

i like #54 the best. I would like to incorporate some sort of graphic into the logo though. I would also like to see "THRIVE" in blue.

Nice work. Much improved!

Thank you!

Here my revisions. #64.

Could I see #64 with "In Line" in a lighter shade of blue instead of black?
Not sure what I think about the graphic over the text, but I still love the text.
Thanks!

Could I see the "IN LINE" in grey instead of blue?
Thanks!

Thank you for giving me some positive feedback. I love this process.

I'm sorry if I didn't respond quickly. But I'll try my best to improve the logo based on your corrections.
Reference entry #67 #68.

Thanks!
Sunardi

Thanks. I think the text is almost perfect. The only thing I would like changed would be to bring "Chiropractic" a little bit closer together.

Thank you for continuing to work on the graphic. I would like to see something to the left of the text that flows to the right.

Thanks for all your work!

I don't want to change anything with "Thrive in line". It is perfect!

I just wanted to shorten "Chiropractic" a little.

I do not like the green graphic very much though.

Thanks again for your submissions!

Thank you!

I'm sorry for those misdirection entries. I hope I've back in the right direction on this #90.
Thanks
Sunardi

Do not change "Thrive In Line".

I want a different picture please. I do not like the green wave.

Can you bring "chiropractic" closer together somehow. It looks too spaced out.
Thanks for all your work!

I would also like the graphic to be to the left of the text. If you can come up with a good graphic you are the winner.

I like that graphic a lot more than the others!
Could you come up with a couple other designs please?
Thank you!

looking for something with less like a circle, but I don't know exactly what.

Thanks again for all your work.

Please send more!

Can you make a design of half a leaf emerging out of water?

Hi Sunardi!

I have requested an extension to the contest because I like your text but am not completely satisfied with the graphic.

I would like to give you more time to create a graphic that is more what I am looking for.

Please continue to submit ideas, I think we can make something that works.

Thanks for everything!

I like how # 124 looks more like leafs.
I like how #123 has the small dark green ball in the center. Can you make the ball in the center blue?

Thank you for guiding me with specific direction.

Here my revisions. #195

Thanks
Sunardi

I like #195 very much. could you send a couple color variations. One with the bottom line a different color, but everything else the same.

Thanks!

Thank you!

Here some color variations. #199

Thanks!
Sunardi

New variations with lighter blue on the bottom line. #200

Thanks!
Sunardi

can you submit #199 but in only one color and in two colors?

I also need to know the what the font is called and the name of the color blue in "Thrive".

I would also like the graphic separated from the text as I don't plan on using the graphic.
Not sure if I should select you as the winner first or after your submissions.
Thanks for all your work!

you do know the color name and font type right?

I do still want the graphic, I just would like the seperated if possible.

I would also like a file in black only please.

I also wanted to see the graphic in only one color and in two as well.

Thanks

Thank you for asking me some revisions on this judging time.

But I'm still confuse about the color options that you want as in one color and two color. Is it one color in blue and two color in blue and grey?

Well, about the font, actually it is not the original style anymore. I mean, I have tweaked them enough into italic style, convert them into object (vector graphic) and made them a little bolder than the original font.
But the original font is "Tachyon". And the blue color is PANTONE Process Cyan.

And you don't have to worry about the file/color variations on the final files, because whoever the winner is, you could ask those files (color variations, with/without graphic etc).

Thanks!
Sunardi

Yes, you are right with the colors. One color is blue and two is blue and grey.