ThriveLogo Design Contest

I think the boundary is too thick on this version

I like this one. can you do versions that:
- don't have the star at the top
- have the text slightly italicized, slanting the words forward, which would show motion
- can you also do a white background one, as black background won't work for all use cases.

This design has potential. A few thoughts:
- I don't love the line through the word, so try taking that out. I like the graphic around the word, and also feel is needs more energy and color blend - it is lacking the motion and fire I'm seeking. On the white background, this design seems weaker than on the black background. Can you make it pop more?

Also, please add my name, Andrew Freedman, at the bottom of the logo, as I'm part of the brand. thanks and keep the ideas coming!

This design has potential. A few thoughts:
- I don't love the line through the word, so try taking that out. I like the graphic around the word, and also feel is needs more energy and color blend - it is lacking the motion and fire I'm seeking.

Also, please add my name, Andrew Freedman, at the bottom of the logo, as I'm part of the brand. thanks and keep the ideas coming!