(my earlier comments referred to entry
#1 and
#2; this comment refers to entry
#5)
interesting.
what i like:
- it has a stronger feel, and the mysterious (almost "shady") vibe i'm looking for
- the red star in the O is a nice touch
- the 3 faces communicate "group", which is good
what doesn't work:
- the faces are just too large, i think. the brand name gets lost a bit in the overwhelming presence of the faces.
- (and here's where i'm going to start to sound like that annoying art director who can't describe what he really wants:) it's a tad too menacing. like i said earlier, i do want some of that vibe (and this one is very much in the right direction), but this feels like it borders on threatening (i'm exaggerating to be clear).