This is quite nice -- thanks. It doesn't *quite* work for me at the moment. The current configuration evokes wartime for me -- searchlights, the Japanese military flag. The factory might be too stark as well. Maybe a different font too?
Thank you very much for your feedback. I send some versions based on it: I changed the sky, the factory has more details now and I send 3 font different options. Please let me know any other change you want to see.