#23 & #24 Very cool design, but maybe a lttle too military. More bling less army. #24 the gradient seems to dissapear a little agains the almost same color background
#23 Please keep working on this design. Really really like it, but it seems like it could us a little more action. It stands out from many of the other design which is a bit plus. #29 doesnt quite work for me.
#30 I actually like #23 much better. I think the new font is inferior to the cut out font from the first one. Also the new wings are not as sharp as the original one. Maybe keep the original look from #23 but make something in addition to it. You could get rid of the star and make something different instead. love the subtle shadow by the way. I think its a little to conservative as it is, and would love to see a little disco in there.
#33 Could you try and remove the white feather around the logo and add some fireworks in the background just above the logo? think it would work?? I like the other subtle elements