The "TRUE" CollectionLogo Design Contest

im liking this design... im wondering if it will be too light in shade for people to see the smaller words... i like the red... and the outer shading? will this be there if i place this in a magazine or on the web? im talking about the perimeter shading of grey

I can darken the grey of the text to make it easier to read.

The perimeter shading is really just for presentation, I can upload a version without that too.
:)

Thanks!

a bit darker grey for the small text slogan line. removed the perimeter shading, and made the whole thing a bit larger for better view

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im going to stick with a periwinkle or blue... i dont think i can use the red for some things

can u give me another option on fonts for this? i like the logo on its own still to the left, but wonder if its too simple... want something people can recognize on its own... im not sure about this butterfly thing yet, but its unique i guess and i dont know of anybody else using something like that

the T&C i like the idea of it working into the logo like you have it for sure...

Sure, different fonts and periwinkle or light blue instead of red.
I will try to make the TC symbol a little more substantial.
Thanks!

do you like the blue dots between villas adventures lifestyle or would a small thin blue vertical line be cleaner? like the one that defines the left and right logo

and the blue... maybe we can go a little darker or periwinkle? maybe its my computer but its a little light and i would want people to be able to see it.... however, if you think it would be fine and show up in print and on the web, then cool

I added the separating lines instead of dots, tweaked the spacing a bit, and used a darker periwinkle color. :)

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i like it more this way yes? does the horizontal line underneath connection need to go all the way over and touch the N? or was this how u designed it? i think it should end at the end of lifestyle.... also, whats your thought on the order the small words are laid out... do u like it the way it is or should the smaller word "villas" be places in the middle for design purposes?

Yep, it looks much better with the lines instead of the dots.

I would imagine that the "Villas" would look better in the middle.

I will correct the underline as well, ending it over the slogan only, and upload a revised version.
Thanks! :)

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