#1 - We really like the combination of Name, plus a vibrant image. We also want to add the Tag Line underneath like #2, keeping the entire concept as square as possible as #1 is. We like your green color more than what we suggested, possibly trying a shade darker as an additional option. We like that the image includes a person but also want to integrate a business growth concept showing upward trajectory that would subtly reflect success in sales and more income. e.g not a dollar sign :-) Thank you for your creativity and efforts!
Entry #8, new ranking #1. We really like your ideas and your choice of the arrow. We've decided to change a word in our tag line. Please change "Sales" to "Business" in the tag line. We like the colors. We like the person. We like the arrow. We would like to see other options for the leaves/flames in the person's hand. What other ideas to you have to signify success, personal growth, or reaching their goal? Thank you!!
Entry #8, Do you think the tag line is too long? Can you try both: Extraordinary Lifelong Success in Business & Life Extraordinary Success in Business & Life Thanks!
The more we keep looking at Entry #8 and Entry #4, we continue to like #4 with the circle instead of the arrow...thinking that it represents "Breaking Through" something to achieving success. Can you suggest other options to portray the concept of breaking through?
So, can you make entry #4 with the tag line, and incorporate our previous 2 comments. Thanks!!
#12 We like the stars. Also want to consider something more substantial like the leaves, like a torch, or something else that represents success. We like the second swoosh. On the arrow, we like the gray swoosh under the arm, but maybe get rid of the tip of the arrow this time and make it a point like the original one. Change the word "Sales" to "Business" in the tag line.
We realize it is late for you, have a great evening and we appreciate your efforts! Thanks.
Our new top ranking is #17. We really like the wording, the new gradient color in Thrive, the swoosh without the arrow, and really like the torch. We would like to see this same logo with (1) change the flame of the torch to orange (2) add the shadow like #18 beneath the person in the same position and (3) make the tag line more noticeable...maybe darker color? maybe bold print? We don't want to stretch it out longer i.e. not under the picture.
We are very excited about the progress and appreciate your efforts. We are moving in a direction of your logo as our top choice. We like #23 as our top choice, but still wanting to see options of making the tag line more prominent. Consider moving the tag line closer to the image like #8 so it can be a larger font. We are not sure of the solution and open to any other options you see that will make it more prominent, possibly bold, possibly darker color...Can you send several options that might accomplish this goal?
And thanks for the B/W versions, that is very helpful as well. Sincerely, Thrive
We are almost there... We still are concerned that the Tag line is not large enough to read easily. Please create a version of #23: (1) with the Tag line moved closer to the green swoosh line to make it larger and easier to read (2) with the Tag line moved underneath the entire logo like one of the other ones...allowing it to be larger font and easier to read
Thank you for offering these new versions to make the tag line more clear to read. There are two of us who look at the revisions before we ask you to make any changes and currently one of us is not available. Before asking you to make any changes we will both look at them and then send you another message.
One thing I can comment is that I know that we both want the tag line in the same color as "The" and "Group Inc." rather than the green color.
For #41, if we remove the line under "The Thrive Group Inc" that you added for the logo across the bottom I am wondering if the logo will look off balance. Possibly eliminate the line under "The Thrive Group Inc." and if it looks out of balance lowering the name slightly to compensate? I think at this point I (speaking only for myself) like the bottom (in the other non-green color) and without the line under our company name.
When we are able to meet again we will talk about our preference for the tag line under the entire logo (#41) or the tag line just to the right of the green swoosh (#43).
Thank you once again for all of your efforts and creativity. We are very happy with the logo and want to make sure that the tag line is good and then I think we are set.
Nice hearing your responsive feedback.. I'm very glad for make the responsive client..:)
I try for remove the line under your company name, Hmm..I feel look off balance with the torch.. so I make the line.. If you need other revision please don't Hesitate for ask me.. thank you
Thanks so much for this latest revision #47. I think we have it! I just spoke with my business partner on the phone and we will look at it together later today but he was able to see a small image on his mobile phone and liked it as well. We will get together later today and confirm that this is the final one and that no more revisions are needed.
Thinking ahead, when we confirm that we have finalized the logo design, can you provide us with the logo as one image, each part of the logo separately (name, image, tag line) so we can use them individually on different items, black & white versions of the above, and in the different file formats?
Thank you again Amanterkendali. You do great work and are a pleasure to work with.
Sure when the contest ended, I'll provide that for you. and also some format file and B & W version. also. Thank's Thrive, I do a great work because of your responsive feedback that very helpfull from you. :)