I really like this design entry #55 - however I prefer the tent structure studio 42 has some up with. If I could put the two together it would be perfect. Also, I would like to to have the website listed (www.therooftopeve.com)
Thank you so much ! I really like the new tent structure and I love "the" being in the entrance of the tent and not on the same line. I like the new fonts too. I think that the website font size can be take down a bit. I previously did not like the blue, however in this design I think it looks sharp - it's just a little too bright and blue - can you scale it back a touch ? Also, when looking at the two new designs in the design without the blue "the" is positioned exactly where it should be in the tent doorway, but not touching the doorway. Whereas in the blue design the script and the tent intersect. Lastly, would it be possible to see the line under rooftop eve to have a bit more flourish and perhaps with a embellishment in the center? Maybe then the date, location and website are below that line - or the line is moved to under date and location and the website below that or the line below all of it... I think you will be able to tell right away what looks good and what doesn't.
Thank you once again and I hope my feedback is helpful and not too critical or specific. It is my hopes to make it easier for you and take some of the guess work out.
Here are the changes :) I also made the tent look a little thinner, a little more delicate, to give it a more feminine flair. The blue opacity has been taken down 10% too.
I really like it ! The only requests I would have would be to space the rooftop eve a little more from the tent and space between the and rooftop eve... also bring the font down on the website. Aside from that it looks amazing ! Thank you!!!