On #28 - Can you de-emphasize The? For #29 - Could you do a version with the sun extended past the edges of the orange background to add a little more interest? And de-emphasize The?
Entry #59 Entry #60 Hi from Greece, i 've de-emphasized the (THE) and extended the sun at #59.Also i 've placed the shield at the side of the text to saw you that is working very good at the side or on the top of the text. I'll wait your comments and if you need any changes i'll be happy to provide them. best regards Vasilis
Question for you....Take a look at the logo at www.reacpa.com. We often use the yellow swirl design in backgrounds of our marketing material. What do you think your design will look like (probably on #60) with your sun replaced with our swirl? As I showed your design to people in the company today, that was one recommendation they had. Of course, I'd need to get you the art to do that, but I'm looking more for your gut instinct opinion.
Obviously, this is our top choice. We just have a few ideas for the icon. We often tilt it a bit (skew about 20%). See http://www.reacpa.com/uploads/moll-cv.pdf for a sample. Can you do that? Perhaps it fills the orange space more - maybe even with th edges going outside of it?