Tilly... Love this-- especially the way you incorporated the tag line. But not sure about the skyline (it's similar to my own Edry Group logo). Can we try something else representing luxury or beauty? Emeralds? Rubies? Or flowers?
Turns out she likes the skyline but she wants it "sparkler." More like Emerald City-like. Or with stars in the sky. Would love to see something before the competition ends.
You are a very close #2.... but to win, we need the skyline tweaked a little. Needs to be a bit more representative of the Manhattan Skyline. I think you tried a stylized version of the Empire State Building, but we need it a bit more realistic. Plus, the three buildings in the middle form a hand giving the middle finger to the world. Not quite the image we want to portray :)
Try and get both the Empire State building as well as the Chrysler building, along with the Citibank building you already have depicted clearly.
Here are several concepts as requested. In this very small format the details are tough to see. I used #111 to show greater detail and let you see the arching top of the Chrysler building, and the familiar spire of the Empire State. This actually makes a nice recognizable standalone icon, which is great as well.
Hi... thanks for the reminder :) Yes, can you do one last thing? Can we try to make the image and/or the lettering in a platinum-like color? Imagine the gold Trump logo, but in silver/platinum..