Thank you so much for your entry!!! Can you put racing goggles on his helmet and try a different shirt pattern (See my photos for ideas) -- he kind of looks like an umpire with stripes. Also, the back of the house that is red, can you make that black, and make a version of #1 with a white background?
i don't like this font either. i don't think script will work with this design. try a different font. i'm leaning towards the star logo shirt. Which shirt design do you like?