The Perry CentreLogo Design Contest

Hi,
Thanks to rank my designs among the top 5 designers. Please don't mind to ask about any change that you wanted to see.

Regards
fermat

I like the feel of your design, just seems a bit busy and some of the elements - the text and the logo seem a bit detached.

Alex.

HI, Id like to bring you back into the contest. The logo I have been pursuing is very illistrative. Yours is more abstract which I like. But can you try a different font and get the tag line to match with the clinic name. Blue green and orange too. Keep it clean and modern and a bit web 2.0

Keen to see what you come up with quickly.

Thanks,

Alex.

Hi... thanks for the chance !.... I'll send the updates asap... two hours the most
Please let me know any change over the updates
Bests Regards
fermat

updates

#130 .. version of #129 with the font from #67
#134 ... version of #130 with more "pointed" shape
#133 .. version of #130 with more drop shape
#132 ... variation with "short arms"
#131 .. variation with "short arms" and more pointed

bests regards

font from 129 is working best, lets stay with that.
I like 129 and 133, but with the font from 129. I like that the shape is more like a drop.

Can you take 133 and just curve the top away so its a bit like a hook, but keeping that nice pregnant belly curve?

I hope that makes sense.

Id also like to see 129 and 133 with some different colour combinations, including in the text. Bring some orange in?

Thanks,

Alex.

Hi
not problem about the updates
#143 .. version of #133 with the font of #129
#144 #145 #146 ... color variations
#147 #148 versions with more "hook" feeling

please, let me know your opinions

bests regards
fermat

Thanks for those, getting close. You havent quite understood what I meant by hook. What I mean is take the top of 133 and hook it to the left lile an 3 bend.

Also the right hand part of 133, the main part is a bit too fat, it needs to taper off more like 134

the green in the logo is good, but the tag line is week, perhaps just make it a but darker?

I prefer the angle of the inner part of the logo in 129, can you also try that in 133, just gently rotate them inside like 130, and also the shading in the main part of the logo, make it a similar angle to 129.

Thanks,

Alex.

Hi Fermat,

I only have 4 days left for this contest. Can you have a look at those last revisions?

Thanks,

Alex.

hi Alex
sorry, but Sunday I was out of the office... now I'm going to update and send the changes, not problem
bests regards
fermat

thanks Fermat, look forward to seeing them.

Alex.

hi
here there are the updates
in all the updates the slogan is bolder

#149 ... I hope that this is the hook that you wanted
#150 .. like 149 but with the head and the children "rotated".... like in #130 #134
#151 .. I added a less fat right arm and a different left arm (smaller)

#152 .. variation of the left arm
#153 .. rotated version of #152

I hope you like it
Bests Regards
fermat

now we are getting somewhere, Ill have a good look later today.
But looking great.

Thanks,

Alex.

Thanks for your comment... I'll be able today for any change that you wanted... just let me know
Bests Regards
fermat

153 is my favourite at the moment, but the right side needs to be more delicate, its too fat and blunt, can it finish off at the same point but taper more so that it is finer? That way it would almost mirror what is happening in the smaller green part.

Hope that makes sense.

Alex.

actually I changed my mind, 133 is the best overall shape, the little hook is not really working for me in 153. But I do like the change in angle of inner part, thats good, make it the same in 133. THe right part still needs to be tapered more and the bolder text from 153 put on too.

Hope I didnt confuse you too much.

ok.. I'm going to send the updates...

#154 .. like #133 but with the bolder slogan from #153 and the angle of the interior part similar to #153 (but a little less rotated)
#155 .. like #154 but with the angle more rotated... equal to #153

hi, here the udpates

#154 .. like #133 but with the bolder slogan from #153 and the angle of the interior part similar to #153 (but a little less rotated)
#155 .. like #154 but with the angle more rotated... equal to #153
#156 .. like #155 but with bolder slogan and different "right arm" .. more stilyzed
#157 .. like #156 but more stilyzed even
#158 .. like #157 and also more stilyzed (pointed) "left arm"

I understand that due to the small size of the LT images sometimes is difficult to see the differences
for that I sent #159 with just the icon from #158

let me know your opinion

bests regards
fermat

use 158, and rotate the colour change so that its the same angle as 129

the right side is looking better

the inner green character is rotated too far, need to be more like 129s angle and

should be better nestled into the main part of the logo, so that the green 'swish' fits pretty neatly into the blue one

while you are at it can you use the text from The Perry Centre and add .com.au on a different page

getting very close!

hi
I sent #160 #161 #162 #163 trying the update the logo with the last changes

Bests Regards
fermat

get rid of .com.au, doesnt look good

ok... actually there are not too much ways to add a .com.au to name, as it needs to be at the end of the name

yes, just get rid of it

use 163 - delete .com.au

make the inner green figure shape follow as closely as possible the outer blue so that it feel like it is fitting neatly into it

with the green figure, you almost had it with 159 - the right side of the green part fitted well, its the left side that also needs to fir better

Hi, here the updates
#164 .. like #163 but without the .com and the green figure more close to the right arm following the shape
#165 .. like #164 but using the icon from #159
#166 .. like #165 but with the inner part a little rotated to be more close to #163

thanks again for your feedback

bests regards
fermat

OK, I think 163 is best, in the slogan get rid of the capital A in And and make it a little a - and

Can you try the word naturally in the orange

Alex.

Hi
not problem about the updates
#167 #168 #169 and #170 with different variants of orange and the "and" updated

Bests Regards
fermat

its good, just get rid of the .com.au and we are pretty much done

here the updates without .com.au
#171 #172 #173 #174

bests regards
fermat