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Comment Activity Open Crate Collective commented on #562 alright bro... This is it!!! 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 You can edit files in AI, EPS or CDR format 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 with an AI file are you able to make an animation out of the images later? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 so theoretically I could make some little tweaks to the thing if I wanted to? 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 Yes, it is true 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 Ok Just so I understand... The files that you're sending me... Those are the AI files, The jpeg files, and the EPS files? right? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 Yeah. Its really clean and doesn't feel entirely distracting. Thats what I mean when I'm asking for a feeling or a description. 11 months ago sadio commented on #544 Withdrawn You can invite me to a 1 to 1 project, of course I will send you what you want 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 Each design has its own uniqueness, but when I saw 538 I really liked it hehe 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 what makes you like these the best? would you be able to tell me specifically or is it just a feeling you get when you look at them? and if its a feeling, would you know how to describe the feeling? 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 1. 538 2. 555 3. 520 4. 562 5. 561 6. 559 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 ok tell me your top 6, π€£π€£π€£ 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 you really did an awesome job bro on all of them and thats probably why each one of them is so hard to choose from 11 months ago sadio commented on #538 Withdrawn for me i like this one 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 honestly they're all good and they all have something unique about them 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 ah man lol. SO MANY conflicting views from so many people. Thats whats making this so difficult for me to choose. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 the best? 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 ops sorry 538 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 i like 358 is a perfect 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #562 out of all these recent iterations, which one do you feel is the absolute best one? 11 months ago sadio commented on #562 please check 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #559 Withdrawn Bro, one more edit. Give me this one with the little separations on the film strips and the audio wave. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #559 Withdrawn 11 months ago sadio commented on #561 Withdrawn i will prepare file 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn alright bro this is it 11 months ago sadio commented on #561 Withdrawn Yes. I've centered it 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn alright. did you center this? 11 months ago sadio commented on #544 Withdrawn Unfortunately the rules on the website are that I can only send 1 logo, but if you like it you can invite me to a 1 to 1 project. Of course, you also get a logo handover certificate for the 1 to 1 project. I will make a very special price for you if you are interested. Thank You 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn Did you center the icon on these? I don't know if I can really tell. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn and 559, ππΌππΌ PLEASE 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn I'm about to select it as the winner now. Thank you so much for all of your work brother. You've done so much to help me during this process and I will not forget it. You have been so amazing and helpful and you kept your cool throughout the whole process. thank you so much again. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn Bro the only thing I ask, if you don't mind. is send 561 and 538. like I was telling you, 538 is the crowd favorite but I figured the best thing to do to make myself and everyone else happy is to make 561 a combination of the 2. But I'm still torn. So if you don't mind, please I'd love to get both. If not I totally understand. 11 months ago sadio commented on #561 Withdrawn yes, i will prepare file now 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #561 Withdrawn Bro I think I'm about to select this one as the winner. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #560 Withdrawn just a little bit. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #560 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #560 Withdrawn Sorry, at the top too. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #558 Withdrawn make those edits too my good sir 11 months ago sadio commented on #558 Withdrawn lesgooo.. okay 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #558 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #520 Withdrawn Let's also get rid of the gradient on the filmstrip 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #520 Withdrawn So I did another survey on these last few. It's looking like #520 and #554 are the top ones. So I'm thinking we should blend the 2 and just call it a day. So let's add the tear from #554 and put it on this one and take the font from #554 and put it on this one as well. and center the icon on the words 11 months ago sadio commented on #555 Withdrawn hey 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #555 Withdrawn Hey Bro 11 months ago sadio commented on #556 Withdrawn play button grey 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #554 Withdrawn Center this one up too bro 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #554 Withdrawn actually leave the play button purple. and Change the O in Open to black. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #554 Withdrawn Can we make the O in Open Black and the play button Grey? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #552 Withdrawn And let's try it with the #546 font 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #552 Withdrawn Hey thank you. Can we make it look more like a tear? Like a rip? 11 months ago sadio commented on #538 Withdrawn I will make it now 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #538 Withdrawn you know what I mean? Like the filmstrip got ripped. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #538 Withdrawn kind of like what I just did here. but make it look like an actual tear 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #538 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #538 Withdrawn Remove, the tail of the audio wave. and then maybe, make the top of the film strip torn? so that it looks balanced without the tail? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #538 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, Good Morning. Can you do this? Make this version of the logo's purple O look as thick as the one from #543? Also,... 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #551 Withdrawn Alright. Thank you for all your work tonight 11 months ago sadio commented on #551 Withdrawn I am so excited 11 months ago sadio commented on #551 Withdrawn I'll be back in a few minutes. I will pray and eat 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #551 Withdrawn no probably not. do you need to rest? 11 months ago sadio commented on #551 Withdrawn Are you going to rest yet? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #551 Withdrawn Hmm 11 months ago sadio commented on #551 Withdrawn I think this is what I can do O in "open" 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #550 Withdrawn Also can you make the reel and strip look closer to the inspiration photo? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #550 Withdrawn Like this but cleaner 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #550 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #550 Withdrawn this is close. Lets make the Wave come right out of the C. Lets make it look like its one continuous graphic. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #548 Withdrawn I will ABSOLUTELY give you the best rating ever 11 months ago sadio commented on #550 Withdrawn I have made it 11 months ago sadio commented on #549 Withdrawn i will make it now, hehe 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #549 Withdrawn You know what I mean? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #549 Withdrawn OHHH wait... you know what?!?! The O in open should be the film reel and the line under PEN should be the Film Strip. and C in Crate should still be a C but the line that comes out of the C should be the sound wave!!! I think thats how it should be. Think that might make way more sense 11 months ago sadio commented on #548 Withdrawn Yes, I hope you give a good review testimonial when the contest project ends, hehe 11 months ago sadio commented on #549 Withdrawn just a sketch 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #548 Withdrawn π€£ Sadio, you're a really good person. You've been so patient and so accommodating. Thank You. Turn the C in crate to a filmstrip and make that whole line under rate be the filmstrip. Just like the one in the inspiration image. I still have to see the word Crate so I think the letters RATE are going to have to be smaller so that they fit on top of the strip. Same thing with PEN, Those letters are going to have to be smaller so we can see the whole word. but make that underline an entire wave. not just and underline, but an entire wave. 11 months ago sadio commented on #547 Withdrawn For you, I will do anything 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #547 Withdrawn but can we try it? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #547 Withdrawn just an idea. I don't know if its going to be good. maybe not. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #547 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #547 Withdrawn make the underline here part of the film strip 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #547 Withdrawn Make the underline here a sound wave? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #547 Withdrawn OK OK OK What about this??? Kind of a new idea. We keep the Purple O. We go back to a Solid C. No film strip or audio wave in it. Just a Solid Black C. But in the text, we make the O in open purple, we make the play button black. and the C in Crate, we make THAT the film strip. The catch though is the bottom part of the C elongates under the rate 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #547 Withdrawn it still doesn't feel right to me. 11 months ago sadio commented on #547 Withdrawn It is awesome and perfect. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #547 Withdrawn What are your thoughts? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #546 Withdrawn Lets make the symbol centered on the text. Right now I think its a little too much over onto the left side now since the film strip isn't on top anymore. I think once we removed that, we needed to move the symbol over to the right a little 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #545 Withdrawn Is the symbol center of the text? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #544 Withdrawn Maybe the same color light grey on the broken box logo from the inspiration pictures. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #544 Withdrawn And maybe make the C in Crate the same color grey too. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #544 Withdrawn Maybe more grey on the film strip. 11 months ago sadio commented on #544 Withdrawn hellow 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #543 Withdrawn and do a gradient on the filmstrip going all the way from the top of the strip to the bottom of the wave. Lets do grey to black. 11 months ago sadio commented on #543 Withdrawn Okay 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #543 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #543 Withdrawn lets try this. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #542 Withdrawn Sadio, π©. I think it all comes down to the C. Something isn't right anymore. I think we lost the 3d box look as we tried to do all these things to it. Some how it doesn't look like a complete box anymore. I don't know how to get this to look right anymore. I don't have any more suggestions. Your very 1st Idea captured the O, the box and the C very well. But it was missing somethings. And now that we've added those things, it still feels like its missing something. How can we make this look 3rd dimensional again? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #538 Withdrawn give me a few font options that really feel good. 11 months ago sadio commented on #538 Withdrawn yes, awesome 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #536 Withdrawn these places that I've marked. add a little space similar to what you did inside. don't get rid of everything. just create a little illusion. just a little 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #536 Withdrawn 11 months ago sadio commented on #536 Withdrawn overall I like this design. perfect 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #535 Withdrawn no not the gradient. the whole font. Maybe another font is what we need to make everything feel complete? 11 months ago sadio commented on #535 Withdrawn font text gradient? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #535 Withdrawn Maybe its the text font? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #531 Withdrawn yeah the input is coming from people within the company though so I have to take their input into consideration 11 months ago sadio commented on #535 Withdrawn Please check, I've edited everything 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #534 Withdrawn I figured if we moved the C in closer, it would allow for the wave to be seen easier. Now I'm wondering if the C needs to move back just a little bit to create some distance between the O and the C? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #534 Withdrawn This line. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #534 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #534 Withdrawn maybe the space between the O and the C is now too small? The only reason I wanted you to make them closer to each other initially is because The wave started to get hidden behind 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #532 Withdrawn if we add the separation on the right hand side where the wave ends, we might have to move the wave in to the left just a little 11 months ago sadio commented on #532 Withdrawn yes, please check my new designs 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #532 Withdrawn lets try that. see how it works 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #532 Withdrawn where I've got the red marks inside the box, you originally had some separation here. do you remember? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #532 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #532 Withdrawn do you remember in your original design, how you had the back image sort of deconstructed? 11 months ago sadio commented on #531 Withdrawn I think you are confused by a lot of input from several people, so you haven't made a choice yet. Look at us going through the design process from a few days ago, you send feedback and we work together 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #531 Withdrawn A lot of people are saying they don't see the C. a lot of people are saying they don't understand the film strip converting into an audio strip. Some people just don't understand what any of this has to do with the company. Just a lot of conflicting ideas 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #530 Withdrawn How can we get this image back to a three dimensional look? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #530 Withdrawn No need to be sorry. I don't think I understand what you mean. But there's no need to be sorry. We're working together to create art. 11 months ago sadio commented on #530 Withdrawn i am sorry. this is just my idea 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #530 Withdrawn I think somehow in the midsts of all this, we lost the box feel. The whole thing used to look like a box at one point. The Combination of the O and the C somehow made the whole thing look like a box before but now it doesn't have that same feeling. Almost as if we lost the 3D look that it had before. 11 months ago sadio commented on #531 Withdrawn no gradient is also very nice to look at 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #529 Withdrawn do you think there's a way to take all of this that we've done, all the coloring and textures and put it the original design? 11 months ago sadio commented on #530 Withdrawn Look, I really like this design 11 months ago sadio commented on #529 Withdrawn requires relatively time, because it changes as a whole 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #529 Withdrawn is it an easy thing for you to physically flip the image changing the perspective? Or is it a lot of work? 11 months ago sadio commented on #529 Withdrawn I removed the gradient in the filmstrip and made the text without gradient, I think the design turned out nice to look at and not busy 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #528 Withdrawn I'm going to need some artistic input here from you Sadio. What are your thoughts and ideas? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #528 Withdrawn I don't know if its the color or if it's the pattern of the film strip or if its starting to get too busy looking. I can't tell 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #528 Withdrawn like it doesn't match. It feels like the patter on the C just doesn't fit with the aesthetic of the entire logo. Just seems off now. I don't know why 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #528 Withdrawn it feels like the C just doesn't fit. 11 months ago sadio commented on #527 Withdrawn lets go.. 11 months ago sadio commented on #527 Withdrawn yes i will make it now. I am so excited 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #527 Withdrawn I'm going to stay up tonight. I don't know what kind of magic we can pull off today but lets try 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #527 Withdrawn lets do all 4 corners on the Purple O 11 months ago sadio commented on #527 Withdrawn I have free time today, don't hesitate to give feedback, so you can immediately have the logo design you want 11 months ago sadio commented on #527 Withdrawn I just did the top left 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #527 Withdrawn you did it to all 4 corners? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #525 Withdrawn just very very very slightly. almost imperceptible 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #525 Withdrawn You made this corner of the film strip slightly rounded. I wondering if you can do that to the corners of the O 11 months ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #525 Withdrawn 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #525 Withdrawn no just the corners. 11 months ago sadio commented on #525 Withdrawn each side rounded? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #525 Withdrawn can you very very slightly round the edges of the O as well. Similar to what you did to the top left corner of the film strip 11 months ago sadio commented on #525 Withdrawn I will make it now 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #525 Withdrawn Hey, Can I see the whole thing without the filmstrip and the wave. Let's see just the text with the Purple Square 11 months ago sadio commented on #525 Withdrawn Don't hesitate to contact me if you find the problem. I will make a revision. Thank You 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #525 Withdrawn Iβm having a hard time with it. Something about the C is bothering everyone. Everyone likes the logo but everyone also has a problem with the C specifically but no one knows exactly what it is. 11 months ago sadio commented on #525 Withdrawn Do you like this? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #524 Withdrawn Everything else is solid and then that just kinda sticks out. I think thatβs whatβs bothering me. I donβt know. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #524 Withdrawn Like itβs the odd man out 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #524 Withdrawn It almost looks like it just doesnβt belong 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #524 Withdrawn You know what I think it is? The C is starting to look like a snake to me. I think thatβs whatβs throwing me off. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #524 Withdrawn Take a little more of the gradient off the right side. Just a little bit more. Letβs see what that looks like. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #524 Withdrawn I canβt tell. 11 months ago sadio commented on #524 Withdrawn look at this design? Is there anything different on strip film in your opinion? 11 months ago sadio commented on #523 Withdrawn text no gradient 11 months ago sadio commented on #522 Withdrawn I changed the gradient above a little 11 months ago sadio commented on #521 Withdrawn i will make it now, I prefer the text color not to use a gradient 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #521 Withdrawn Something just doesnβt feel 100% to me. Do you have any suggestions? What are your eyes saying to you? Something feels wrong to me about the film strip. I just donβt know what it is. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #521 Withdrawn Can we get rid of some of the gradient on the top right hand side. Just a little of it. 11 months ago sadio commented on #521 Withdrawn Sorry, I just had problems with the internet in my area, I sent a new design, please check , thank you 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #520 Withdrawn Hello? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #520 Withdrawn What do you think? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #520 Withdrawn Something tells me that maybe the C needs to be darker in order to contrast with the O. I donβt know. What do you think? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #520 Withdrawn Ok. Honest opinionβ¦ do you think thatβs all thatβs wrong with it? I love it but at the same time Iβm just not 100% sure. I just canβt put my finger on what it is 11 months ago sadio commented on #519 Withdrawn I think the curve of the film strip at the bottom is too wide, I fixed it and have sent a new design 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #519 Withdrawn I don't think I have much input left on this. I'll be very honest, I really really like what we've got here. BUT something feels just a little bit off. I can't tell what that might be though. Do you have any artistic opinions to offer? Is there something that you feel might make this look very good? 11 months ago sadio commented on #519 Withdrawn thank you very much 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #519 Withdrawn this is really looking good radio. I mean really looking good!! ππΌππΌ 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #518 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, I'm really liking this. I uploaded another image to the briefing. Its a picture of the letter O from the Open text. It has a purple play button on it with a gradient. Do you think you can add something like that to this? 11 months ago sadio commented on #517 Withdrawn thank you very much, i will make it now. I am so excited 11 months ago sadio commented on #516 Withdrawn How do you do mr. I hope you have a nice day 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #517 Withdrawn Looking Good Sadio. Looking Real Good. Lets see the text with it now. 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #516 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, Good Morning. Thank you for the work. Do you think we can move the O slightly closer? 11 months ago Open Crate Collective commented on #514 Withdrawn This is the best one so far 365 days ago sadio commented on #513 Withdrawn Thank you for feedback 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #513 Withdrawn the coloring looks a bit off and the film strip doesn't look like its folding over onto itself and if it is, I can't see it because the little window Is too small. As I said quite a few times ago, if you increase the over all size of the entire logo about 10 - 15% you might just be able to make the edit that we've been desperate to find 365 days ago sadio commented on #512 Withdrawn I'm having trouble in the corner 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #512 Withdrawn If the problem is this particular wave style, then lets go back to the more simple one so you can have more real estate to work with. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #512 Withdrawn Just have the film flip onto itself right here. As I mentioned, maybe the whole logo needs to be about 10-15% larger so that you can see the detail in what you're trying to accomplish 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #512 Withdrawn 365 days ago sadio commented on #513 Withdrawn just a sketch 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #512 Withdrawn there's no need to drop the bell curve below the audio line 365 days ago sadio commented on #512 Withdrawn I'm designing again in the corner 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #512 Withdrawn this isn't it. you've created a hook instead of a fold over. look at the inspiration picture closer 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #511 Withdrawn angle for what specifically? just the corner right? you're not changing or moving anything else right? 365 days ago sadio commented on #511 Withdrawn takes a little time to find the right angle, 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #511 Withdrawn remember please keep things almost exactly how you have it now. this looks like a C. We cannot lose what we have. just make that corner look like it's overlapping itself. It kind of already does. So you don't need to do too much. Maybe what might have to happen in order for you to get the detail, you might have to make the whole thing a little bigger by 10 - 15% 365 days ago sadio commented on #511 Withdrawn I'm trying to tinker and haven't found the right position 365 days ago sadio commented on #511 Withdrawn yes, I'm trying 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #511 Withdrawn just don't over do it. the way you have it now looks fantastic. I don't want things to change too much here. please. Just let the curve be a slight loop over like the inspiration picture 365 days ago sadio commented on #511 Withdrawn yes i will make it now 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #511 Withdrawn I have uploaded another picture for you to look at so you can see what I mean about the twist and what it should look like in that corner. being able to see through the strip 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #511 Withdrawn can you make this part look like its twisting just a little? don't change it too much. just make it look like it's twisting just a little bit. Refer back to the film reel inspiration picture. if you look at the middle of the inspiration picture, you will notice that the film strip twists just a little bit on to itself and you can see through the strip a little bit. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #511 Withdrawn 365 days ago sadio commented on #511 Withdrawn i will make it now for new feedback 365 days ago sadio commented on #511 Withdrawn just a sketch 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #510 Withdrawn We can start to make the 3rd frame of the strip look like that other gold film strip I uploaded as inspiration. Do NOT make it gold. just look at the image so you can copy everything else about it. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #510 Withdrawn 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #510 Withdrawn do you see the 2nd film strip that I uploaded for inspiration? the gold colored one? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #510 Withdrawn this is where I want the line to curve 365 days ago sadio commented on #510 Withdrawn i will make it now 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #510 Withdrawn 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #510 Withdrawn yes like this. 365 days ago sadio commented on #510 Withdrawn just a sketch 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #509 Withdrawn it should occupy relatively the same space 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #509 Withdrawn the wave is replacing the film strip 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #509 Withdrawn and then move that wave line down closer to the bottom film strip 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #509 Withdrawn move the waviest part over to the right a little bit so its more centered 365 days ago sadio commented on #509 Withdrawn just a sketch. Is it like this? 365 days ago sadio commented on #507 Withdrawn i will make revision 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #508 Withdrawn this is where the curve should start for the wave but it should be very very very very slight. on the 4th square is where it should begin. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #508 Withdrawn 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #508 Withdrawn this little curve is great. do not touch it. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #507 Withdrawn When the wave connects here, there should be slight curve in this corner, exactly how you have it at the top corner. There is a slight curve. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #507 Withdrawn 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #507 Withdrawn the shading on each frame should make it look like its slightly transparent 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #506 Withdrawn Gradient Starts Here 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #506 Withdrawn 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #506 Withdrawn no gradient here. 365 days ago sadio commented on #504 Withdrawn I made color gradations and adjusted the color shading 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #504 Withdrawn please tell me if what I asked makes sense Sadio before you make anything. I need to know that you understood what I'm asking 365 days ago sadio commented on #504 Withdrawn i will make it now 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #504 Withdrawn does that make sense? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #504 Withdrawn I want to make our film strip look like that. when I say this, I don't mean I want the shape to be the same. I just want the colors to be the same. the shading, the grading. thats what I want to be the same. not the shape. not the spiral. I want the color and shading and grading. 365 days ago sadio commented on #504 Withdrawn yes i see it 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #504 Withdrawn Ok. Let's look at the images that I uploaded. Specifically the film strip with the circle reel on it. Do you see it? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #503 Withdrawn the Whole Film Strip 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #503 Withdrawn Sadio, Just Give Me The Film Strip. Nothing Else. JUST THE FILM STRIP in a C 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #503 Withdrawn you see this is exactly the problem that I'm having with you. this is what confuses me. in this image, you've moved the waviest part of the wave closer to the spine of the C. but it #502 you have the waviest part of the wave more to the middle of the wave line. why did you do that? I didn't ask you to do this. All I said was lets start with the film strip. Can we work with one direction at at time please. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #502 Withdrawn Sadio, lets start with JUST the C. forget about the O. The O isn't the problem. Please.. 365 days ago sadio commented on #502 Withdrawn is it true that the top film strip is horizontal and the sound wave is in the logo? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #490 Withdrawn we have to figure out what the misunderstanding is because it keeps happening. you keep fixing something and then breaking it back to exactly what things were before you fixed it. it just seems like we're going in circles and I don't know why 365 days ago sadio commented on #490 Withdrawn yes, Unfortunately I made a mistake in executing the logo, because I misunderstood your feedback 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #490 Withdrawn looking at it as it is in this picture, it looks very very close to being a C right now. It has the shape of a C. its just how you choose to blend the 2 that makes it not look right. thats where the problem keeps coming up 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #490 Withdrawn its not difficult. its just the way you choose to morph them together 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn lets start with the whole film strip again. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn I can't go to sleep right now because I don't think you'll be able to get this right without my direction. We're going in circles. the language barrier is making this extremely difficult for me. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #501 Withdrawn its getting late Sadio we need to wrap this up soon because I need to get some sleep so let me know what other chat options you have so we can transfer the conversation over there 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #501 Withdrawn or skype? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #501 Withdrawn or discord? 365 days ago sadio commented on #500 Withdrawn Unfortunately, website policy is not to contact clients outside this website, after this contest ends 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #501 Withdrawn do you use what's app? 365 days ago sadio commented on #500 Withdrawn I will be awake at night to finish this work, please if you will now go to bed to rest 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #501 Withdrawn does this honestly look good to you Sadio? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #501 Withdrawn we need to find a new chat system 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn We need to find another chat option. Something that is real time 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn I ask you to not do something and you keep doing the same thing over and over. I'm not sure where the disconnect in communication rests but its starting to really wear me down 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn we need to find another way of communicating because this isn't working 365 days ago sadio commented on #500 Withdrawn yes i will make it now 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn Start with the film strip 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn Get rid of the O for now 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn Let's start over. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn I did not upload the spiraling film strip for you to copy the spiral. I uploaded it because I want the COLOR. I WANT THE TEXTURE. PLEASE!! I don't know how else to explain that. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn I am losing patience 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn I DO NOT WANT THE FILM STRIP TO SPIRAL 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #500 Withdrawn this is not it. I don't know whats happening man. This is getting to be very frustrating 365 days ago sadio commented on #490 Withdrawn it is very difficult to be the letter C with stip film into the waves 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #490 Withdrawn for the most part the C in this sketch still looks like a C. something changes the minute you try to morph the strip into the wave. it's the way that you're trying to make them morph that doesn't work 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #498 Withdrawn Let's start with the C 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #498 Withdrawn Move the O out of the way 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #498 Withdrawn it can't look like an E. It can't look like some random items thrown about. IT HAS TO LOOK LIKE A C. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #498 Withdrawn No matter what Sadio, this has to look like a C 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #498 Withdrawn when I sent the film strip as reference, It wasn't for you to copy the loops or bends. I like the coloring, shading and texturing. Instead of having our strip just black and white the way we have it, I'd like it to look more like film so people can differentiate it from a ladder 365 days ago sadio commented on #497 Withdrawn please check my new designs 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #497 Withdrawn Sadio, We're working against a very fast clock right now. And it makes it much harder because of our time difference. It is 10pm here at night. Almost time for me to go to bed. We need to be working a bit faster and more accurately. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #497 Withdrawn those images are for texture. I also uploaded one more image just now of a film strip. It's crushed. Use that for inspiration on how to crush the strip into the wave 365 days ago sadio commented on #497 Withdrawn yes, I've seen examples in the brief, thanks for feedback 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #497 Withdrawn I uploaded 2 new images for you to look at. I'd like to have the film strip look closer to the texture of the one I sent and the wave to look closer to the new one I uploaded. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #497 Withdrawn no. this was what I was talking about in the last post where I mentioned I wanted it more crushed looking instead of curved. 365 days ago sadio commented on #497 Withdrawn Is the vertical part of the film strip appropriate? 365 days ago sadio commented on #496 Withdrawn yes, i will make it now 365 days ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #496 Withdrawn There are 8 bars going across the top of the strip. remove every other bar so that there's only 4 going across. doing this will make it look less like a ladder. 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #496 Withdrawn I think I would rather it be a little more crushed looking instead 365 days ago sadio commented on #496 Withdrawn Is the correct way to connect the strip film and audio wave in this design? 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #495 Withdrawn Yes the position of the wave is looking good 365 days ago sadio commented on #495 Withdrawn version 2 365 days ago sadio commented on #494 Withdrawn are there any revisions to the film strip? 365 days ago sadio commented on #493 Withdrawn thank you , i will make revision 365 days ago Open Crate Collective commented on #493 Withdrawn somehow we have to distinguish this from a ladder 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #493 Withdrawn and 2 of the lines on the spine of the C. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #493 Withdrawn If you get rid of 4 of the dividing lines on the top of the film strip, I think it might look more like a film strip instead of a ladder 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #493 Withdrawn the one thing about the film strip right now is it looks like a ladder. we can't have it looking like a ladder. it has to look like a film strip. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #493 Withdrawn yes this is true. the sound wave should be a little bit lower though. Maybe not so much in the middle. maybe as close to the bottom so we can maintain the illusion of the C 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #492 Withdrawn yes 1 year ago sadio commented on #493 Withdrawn is it true that the sound wave in the middle is like this? I will revise it step by step. ignore film strips that are not yet connected to the wave 1 year ago sadio commented on #492 Withdrawn is this good? if appropriate, I will start making wave sounds 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #491 Withdrawn looking good so far 1 year ago sadio commented on #491 Withdrawn just a sketch. is this true to size? Is the distance between O and C too close? 1 year ago sadio commented on #490 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #490 Withdrawn Starting to look good. You have to bring the O and C closer to each other and make them thinner too. Right nos they look too thick 1 year ago sadio commented on #490 Withdrawn just a sketch, I haven't given the wave shape 1 year ago sadio commented on #485 Withdrawn I Will make it now 1 year ago sadio commented on #485 Withdrawn Thank you very much 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn I just uploaded another picture. Take a look at it please. I think it will help you to understand the angle I think will work well 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn Saya kehilangan kepercayaan 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn menjelaskan banyak hal sangatlah sulit. Perbedaan bahasanya terlalu besar. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #436 Withdrawn Sadio, do you see how clear the opening is on this picture? Do you see how very easily you're able to see the wave? I want to see this same amount of opening on #485. Thats the only way you'll CLEARLY be able to see the wave. Please I don't know how else to explain this to you and I'm starting to lose faith. 1 year ago sadio commented on #485 Withdrawn I am from indonesia 1 year ago sadio commented on #485 Withdrawn my english is not good. i use google translator to capture your feedback. forgive me if I don't understand what you mean 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn I really like the coloring that you did on the O. I want to see what the O and the C would look like closer together. and the C turned into the film strip and Audio Wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn I just want to see what it would look like. Nothing else seems to be working. I wish I knew how to articulate things properly. Can you tell me what your native language is? Maybe I can use a translator to try and say it right. 1 year ago sadio commented on #485 Withdrawn Are you sure about this sketch? does a wave form like 485? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn if you put these closer together, what would it look like with the film strip and wave? 1 year ago sadio commented on #487 Withdrawn what are the revisions to this design? 1 year ago sadio commented on #488 Withdrawn yes, I will revise step by step 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #488 Withdrawn Every time we make a change, Sadio, you HAVE to remember what I"m trying to accomplish here. The C NEEDS to contain the image of the film strip changing itself into the wave form through small gradual creases or wrinkles in the surface , 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #488 Withdrawn This can't just be a straight line. We need to see and understand that this is a part of the film strip and that its TURNING INTO the wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #488 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #488 Withdrawn the space in between the O and the C is a little too wide. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #484 Withdrawn I don't understand the question. What is your native language if you don't mind me asking? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #486 Withdrawn I don't think so for now. Lets see what it looks like with the film strip 1 year ago sadio commented on #486 Withdrawn is there any revision for viewing angle? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #486 Withdrawn Looking better. 1 year ago sadio commented on #486 Withdrawn sketch 1 year ago sadio commented on #484 Withdrawn I know what you mean, is it for straight waves? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn are you talking about the color and shading of the purple O or are you talking about the position? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #484 Withdrawn this is getting closer but the O and the C now look a little too thick 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn we need to see the wave almost straight on. you're not tilting it in such a way that will open up our view 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #485 Withdrawn adio, the goal is to have a very clear view of the opening so that we can see the wave. I'm not sure where you're going with this. 1 year ago sadio commented on #483 Withdrawn Is this what you mean 1 year ago sadio commented on #485 Withdrawn do you like this sketch? 1 year ago sadio commented on #482 Withdrawn I was fiddling with the design just now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #482 Withdrawn how's it going? 1 year ago sadio commented on #482 Withdrawn I've seen samples. I will make a revision now, thank you for your explanation 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #482 Withdrawn I can't sketch it. I just sent you 2 pictures with some text on it. Check them out 1 year ago sadio commented on #482 Withdrawn can you send a sketch? 1 year ago sadio commented on #482 Withdrawn I don't understand what you mean 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #482 Withdrawn there are so many other angles to choose from but you just use those 2 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #482 Withdrawn yes I want to see more of the opening for sure, but you have it now where it looks like its tilting forward from the top. Thats not what I want 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #482 Withdrawn Or you pit it on its right bottom point. Why don't you experiment with different angles? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #482 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #482 Withdrawn You kind of keep doing the exact same thing though Sadio. It seems as though you're only using 2 angles. Its like you're either making it sit flat like this 1 year ago sadio commented on #482 Withdrawn is this what you mean 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #481 Withdrawn that way the white part will be more toward us. so we can see more of the wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #481 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #481 Withdrawn and then. twist the whole image tilting it backward 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #481 Withdrawn twist the image back in the direction of the arrows. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #481 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, I'm not sure if we're on the same page here. I see the changes you've made but I don't think I'm explaining the exactly what I'm trying to have you do. Look at the directions of the arrows I'm about to draw on the image 1 year ago sadio commented on #481 Withdrawn view rotated designs or new shapes with hexagons 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #481 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, I like the gradient., did you try to adjust the positions though? So far youβve only shown me the 2. Remember weβre trying to get more of that window view to see more of the wave. 1 year ago sadio commented on #481 Withdrawn if I form an O like this and add a gradient this is very amazing to me, it looks like a very unique OC shape, do you have any feedback on this revision? or you don't like gradients in O? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #478 Withdrawn Hey Sadio. Itβs 5:19pm for me and itβs 5:19am for you. 12 hour difference. The last message I sent you asked if you had any luck after I told you to just keep playing with the orientation until you get a clear image. Have you done that? Have you had any luck? 1 year ago sadio commented on #478 Withdrawn Hellow 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #478 Withdrawn hey Sadio. Any luck? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #478 Withdrawn like just keep playing with the orientation till we get a good clear image of everything 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #478 Withdrawn right now it looks like its leaning forward. can you make it look like its leaning back? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #478 Withdrawn can you tilt the whole thing back a bit 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #477 Withdrawn thats too big of a shift. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #476 Withdrawn its kind of like you're turning the objects slightly so you can see inside the window better. Am I making sense? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #476 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #476 Withdrawn No, I don't mean to move just the O forward. I mean keep the same distance between the O and the C but shift both the O and the C (film strip/Audio Wave) at the same time. Shit the whole thing in the directions of the arrows. Do you know what I mean? 1 year ago sadio commented on #476 Withdrawn If I drag it, it will create a lot of white space like before in the letter O 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #476 Withdrawn what do you think? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #476 Withdrawn we would kinda have to shift it a little like that right? But not TOO much because then it might look weird. Right? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #476 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #476 Withdrawn thats what I was afraid of. Ok lets think of this as a real physical object. If we wanted to see more of the wave, what would we have to do? We'd have to shift the whole thing a little bit right? that opening is pretty much a window right? So if we wanted to see in that window, we'd have to shift the object a little bit so that we could see more into the window. 1 year ago sadio commented on #476 Withdrawn What is the feedback for this design? should I add more waves? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #475 Withdrawn but this sketch looks good. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #475 Withdrawn I think there should be more of the wave here too. 1 year ago sadio commented on #476 Withdrawn if there is an O in the logo 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #475 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #475 Withdrawn yes I think this sketch is good. but 1 year ago sadio commented on #475 Withdrawn I made a sketch, please give feedback 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #474 Withdrawn no. lets remove the O and start with Just the top part of the C and the Spine of the C. Leave out the bottom of the C for now. Put the Spine of the C back to normal for a minute. Lets go back to where we both thought the C was perfect. Just remove the bottom of it. 1 year ago sadio commented on #466 Withdrawn yes i know you mean 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #466 Withdrawn You know what I mean? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #466 Withdrawn maybe by the time it gets here, its already the straight line and it then makes the 90 degree angle into the waves thin line? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #466 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #466 Withdrawn And the change from film strip to audio wave starts here. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #466 Withdrawn so the thin line of the wave maybe it should start right here. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #473 Withdrawn maybe by the time it gets to where the film strip originally folds, thats where the wave starts. Do you know what I mean? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #473 Withdrawn I think by this point it should already be a little thinner than it is. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #473 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #473 Withdrawn Might have to start the change a little higher. 1 year ago sadio commented on #473 Withdrawn new 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #468 Withdrawn I see what you're saying 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #471 Withdrawn Let's see if we can start the change from mid way up the spine. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #471 Withdrawn 1 year ago sadio commented on #472 Withdrawn oc 1 year ago sadio commented on #471 Withdrawn only c 1 year ago sadio commented on #469 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago sadio commented on #470 Withdrawn design improvisation 2 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #469 Withdrawn so lets go ahead and remove the O again so that we can see what we're working with 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #469 Withdrawn and this can no longer be the film strip. it has to be a part of the audio wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #469 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #469 Withdrawn you have to make the film strip morph into the audio wave. it can't just connect to it. 1 year ago sadio commented on #469 Withdrawn design improvisation 1 year ago sadio commented on #468 Withdrawn I'm having a bit of difficulty adding waves position in O, I'm afraid you won't like it 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #468 Withdrawn ok now for the wave 1 year ago sadio commented on #468 Withdrawn Thank you, I'm very excited 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #468 Withdrawn don't you think so? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #468 Withdrawn feel like this is really getting super close 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #467 Withdrawn I'm not sure I really like this part of the film strip. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #467 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #467 Withdrawn are you starting to see the vision now though? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #467 Withdrawn If we can somehow slim that part down, I think it might eliminate some of the white space. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #467 Withdrawn this part right here. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #467 Withdrawn Ok this is starting to look great But here is the issue now. Its the O. This was what I was talking about earlier. There's too much white space there. And I think that has to to with... 1 year ago sadio commented on #467 Withdrawn I haven't cut the side, so you can see if the design is added O it looks like this 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #466 Withdrawn Alright, Lets see what happens when we put the O back in now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #465 Withdrawn No gradient here. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #465 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #465 Withdrawn This is the only place that the gradient should be 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #465 Withdrawn Yes this is looking correct. except for the gradient on the spine of the C. That should be solid. 1 year ago sadio commented on #464 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #464 Withdrawn and then continue the spine of the C going up so that the 2 pieces intersect with each other. What would that look like? I just want to see it if you can do it. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #464 Withdrawn This corner? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #464 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #464 Withdrawn and then move the top of the C towards... 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #464 Withdrawn I see what you're saying. I wonder though... I wish I could draw what I'm about to ask so you could see it. I'll try to articulate it as best I can. What if you remove this... 1 year ago sadio commented on #464 Withdrawn I added a red guide line 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #462 Withdrawn And then lets look at the picture I uploaded with the red ribbon in it and lets focus on that top left hand corner. On your screen can you put the 2 images side by side each other to see what we would have to do to make that film strip fold like the ribbon? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #462 Withdrawn Ok, lets remove the O again and look at the C by itself for a minute. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #463 Withdrawn I see your point. That little piece is definitely needed in order to make it fully look like a C. I just don't know how to make it actually work properly now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #462 Withdrawn I see your point 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #461 Withdrawn I see what you're saying. hmm. I'm not sure what to do now. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #461 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #461 Withdrawn purple Gradient should start here. and not in the place that you have it now. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #461 Withdrawn This shouldn't have a gradient on it. 1 year ago sadio commented on #461 Withdrawn if I change the side point in the movie ,it will look a bit strange 1 year ago sadio commented on #460 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #460 Withdrawn The gradient should start from over here. Remember by the time you get to the audio wave, the strip leading up to the audio should be at its darkest. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #460 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #460 Withdrawn One other thing to remember though is the gradient 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #460 Withdrawn but yes it's getting much closer 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #460 Withdrawn the little dots on the side of the frame aren't going in the right direction 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #460 Withdrawn getting closer but I don't know if its entirely accurate. If you remove the O and look at the piece that you added, I think you'll see that the sides are going in the wrong direction. 1 year ago sadio commented on #460 Withdrawn is this what you mean? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #459 Withdrawn is there something different on this one in comparison to #458? If so I can't tell the difference. 1 year ago sadio commented on #458 Withdrawn yes, thank you for your feedback 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #458 Withdrawn I think the problem you're going to run into if you keep moving forward is with the O. It's pretty much the same issue you had with the C. You've gotta fix the perspective of the O as well. You gotta take your time and look at every single element that you're adding in. Once you change perspectives, everything changes and you have to think about how thats going to affect the image every step of the way 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #458 Withdrawn The only thing missing is the crease/bend of the strip in this corner. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #458 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #458 Withdrawn yes this is VERY Very close. 1 year ago sadio commented on #458 Withdrawn I haven't included audio waves, is this the design you mean? for C design 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn Because right now it really looks like you just copied and pasted stuff on top of it and didn't take the time to really craft out what I've been describing to you. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn Am I making sense here or am I confusing you? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #457 Withdrawn And finally this part right here. This is the part that you were having real troubles understanding what it was that im' looking for. This part has to be where the film strip morphs into the audio wave. it can't just be a function of you cutting and pasting the wave form on top of the fully formed film strip. you have to morph it into it. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #457 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #457 Withdrawn So this part right here should represent the inside of the ribbon. It's all about perspective. On the other images it makes sense that we're seeing the outside of the ribbon, because of the way that the cube is positioned. but because we've changed the position of the cube, the perspective has to change as well. We can't just be cutting and pasting and hoping for the best. We gotta be thinking about perspectives 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn Finally the spine of the C in my picture, do you see how it doesn't look like the top part of the ribbon? That's because what we're looking at from this perspective is the inside of the ribbon. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #457 Withdrawn This part is the part of the ribbon thats sitting on the table in my picture 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn and if you look at the image I uploaded, the part of the ribbon thats on the table... 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #457 Withdrawn The top of the ribbon in my picture represents this part of your image. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn do you see the top of the strip? its got all the glitter? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn I just uploaded a picture that I just took. its a ribbon that I cut and formed into a C similar to what we are trying to do with the filmstrip 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn I'm going to upload an image for you to look at. something that I just took a picture of. I want to show you a perspective 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn before you make a revision just tell me does it look like a C? 1 year ago sadio commented on #457 Withdrawn i will make revision now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn also, imagine if you had an actual film strip in your hand right now, and you where to try and bend it into the shape of the letter C, do you think it would look like this? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #457 Withdrawn Ok do you see the problem here? Do you see why I keep having you go over the design? This is supposed to look like the letter C. Do you see what I'm saying? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #455 Withdrawn can you disable or hide the purple O for me for a minute and then upload that just so I can see the image without it? 1 year ago sadio commented on #455 Withdrawn I use Corel Draw. Yes, I design with lelement in layers 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #455 Withdrawn Sadio, help me understand your process. Are you using Adobe to create these? Can you tell me if you design each element in layers? 1 year ago sadio commented on #453 Withdrawn Thank you for your feedback, I am very passionate about this work, forgive me if I misunderstood your feedback 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #453 Withdrawn you keep leaving out the most important elements of your own picture 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #453 Withdrawn This image that I've circled here, the film strip and audio wave, this is what's behind the Purple O, Right? I need to see that illustrated in the drawing 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #453 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #453 Withdrawn Audio Wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #453 Withdrawn Film Strip 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #453 Withdrawn Film Strip 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #453 Withdrawn I need to see the film strip right here. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn Also, the wave isn't perpendicular to the floor of the purple O 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn Imagine this was an actual real box in your hand. If you rotated #446 from the position its in now into the position you've put it in in #450, what are the things you'd be seeing? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #450 Withdrawn And instead of seeing the end of the filmstrip here, it really should be the continuation of the audio wave. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn I don't think you're taking into account the new perspective though Sadio. Look at markup 1. That should be a continuation of the filmstrip. and the Markup 2 should be where the wave begins. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #450 Withdrawn 1 year ago sadio commented on #450 Withdrawn Yes, I know...that's why I made 2 designs for choice. In this design I drew a line from the right side. while I adjusted other designs from the left 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #450 Withdrawn Audio Wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #450 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #450 Withdrawn Film Strip 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn I see the variations but do you see what I'm asking you? 1 year ago sadio commented on #448 Withdrawn Forgive me if I misunderstood your explanation. 1 year ago sadio commented on #450 Withdrawn I made variations of 450 and 452 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn Whats left over in this image, does it look like a C? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn If it is on its own layer, can you hide it for a minute and then tell me what you see? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn Can you do me a favor? Can you tell me if the purple O is on its own layer? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #450 Withdrawn Sadio, I want to make sure that you and I are both looking at this image in the exact same way so that when I'm describing things to you, there isn't any confusion. Is that ok? Whether this is how you intended it to be when you first designed it or not, to me that purple shape is an O and it represents the first letter O in Open Crate. The image at the back now, whether it was your intention or not, represents the letter C to me the 1st letter in Crate. So the 2 images combined, in my eyes, represents OC or Open Crate and they come together beautifully to form a 3rd dimensional box. It was brilliant. It was brilliant because the white open space in the purple O allowed us (the audience) to see straight through it all the way to the C. It was brilliant. But I saw a little further that we'd be able to introduce the film strip and the audio wave. Once I saw that, I wanted you to make that C in the background a blend between the 2 things because of how you already had that C being deconstructed. It was just perfect. So with all of this said Sadio, the mission from here on out should ALWAYS be to make sure that the O and the C stay in tact, and that C be an amalgamation of the Audio Wave and the Film Strip. No matter what else happens. No matter what orientation we move the icon in. The O Always needs to be in the front and the C at the back, It always has to be proportionate to each other and the C has to always be a blend of the Strip and the Wave. I hope I explained that right. Is that confusing? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #448 Withdrawn Sadio, I want to make sure that you and I are both looking at this image in the exact same way so that when I'm describing things to you, there isn't any confusion. Is that ok? Whether this is how you intended it to be when you first designed it or not, to me that purple shape is an O and it represents the first letter O in Open Crate. The image at the back now, whether it was your intention or not, represents the letter C to me the 1st letter in Crate. So the 2 images combined, in my eyes, represents OC or Open Crate and they come together beautifully to form a 3rd dimensional box. It was brilliant. It was brilliant because the white open space in the purple O allowed us (the audience) to see straight through it all the way to the C. It was brilliant. But I saw a little further that we'd be able to introduce the film strip and the audio wave. Once I saw that, I wanted you to make that C in the background a blend between the 2 things because of how you already had that C being deconstructed. It was just perfect. So with all of this said Sadio, the mission from here on out should ALWAYS be to make sure that the O and the C stay in tact, and that C be an amalgamation of the Audio Wave and the Film Strip. No matter what else happens. No matter what orientation we move the icon in. The O Always needs to be in the front and the C at the back, It always has to be proportionate to each other and the C has to always be a blend of the Strip and the Wave. I hope I explained that right. Is that confusing? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #448 Withdrawn Sadio, The wave gotta make the image at the back look like a C so you've gotta reverse the wave too. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #446 Withdrawn Alright I think this is it for now. Last thing for the day, Can you do ALL of this, to #265? The film strip, the audio wave, the gradient, Everything. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #445 Withdrawn Ok I think this might be it for now. Lets do the exact same thing to #435 1 year ago sadio commented on #444 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #444 Withdrawn Put the whole logo back to the size it was. and just shrink the part of the logo that I circled 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #444 Withdrawn Just this part. Shrink it slightly 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #444 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #444 Withdrawn Not the whole logo Sadio. 1 year ago sadio commented on #444 Withdrawn shrink logo 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #436 Withdrawn sorry, shrink. can we shrink it just a little bit so it looks a bit more centered 1 year ago sadio commented on #436 Withdrawn string in wave sound? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #436 Withdrawn and on #435 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #436 Withdrawn just a small amount 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #436 Withdrawn Can we string the strip/wave just a little bit? 1 year ago sadio commented on #436 Withdrawn or this 1 year ago sadio commented on #434 Withdrawn Which design do you like? #430 or #434 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #434 Withdrawn Sometimes when you look at it at 1st glance, it has the appearance of a diamond. but thats just because the points are so directly North and South. I think if we tilt it slightly and a really mean slightly, it'll open up the front a bit and make it unmistakably seen as a box 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #434 Withdrawn By shifting it the way you have, the box looks like its tilting downward now. I really like the orientation of the icon the way it is in #430 and #435. The reason I'm asking you to shift it slightly is because I believe it'll make the box easily recognizable by any audience member as a box for sure and never ever mistaken as a diamond. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #434 Withdrawn If you go back to image #430 and look at the E in Open, you'll see that I placed a red dot on the Right Corner of the E. That is where I wanted the left tip of the Purple O to point toward. 1 year ago sadio commented on #434 Withdrawn My understanding was wrong when you explained it, perhaps, resulting in a wrong implementation 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #434 Withdrawn I showed you on the last image where I wanted the point to land but you've moved the point all the way over to the left of the E. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #434 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, Thank you for fixing the filmstrip. I think it's starting to look so much better now. Is there a reason why you shifted the orientation SO MUCH? I asked you to shift it SLIGHTLY. Is it a limitation of the software that you're using to create the logo? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #430 Withdrawn Again, please just do all of these adjustments in VERY SMALL increments. If you do too much it will change the image too drastically. Just small increments. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #430 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #430 Withdrawn Let's tilt the icon in the direction I drew the arrows. Please just do it really slightly. Do not make too drastic of a tilt to the point that it changes the images geometry. Right now the way it's sitting, the bottom tip of the icon is centered in between the E and the N of the text. Tilt the Icon just enough so that the bottom tip of it lines up with the little dot I drew on the E. The top tip should obviously automatically follow too in order to keep the square's perfect ratio 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #430 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, Sorry. Ended up falling asleep. It was 4 in the morning for me when we got to texting. This seems cool. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #430 Withdrawn Is there a specific reason why you're ignoring the request that I've been making about this section of the wave? can you form small creases or wrinkles in the surface right here? Take a look at the new wave image I uploaded for reference. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #430 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #428 Withdrawn definition of crinkle - form small creases or wrinkles in the surface of something 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #428 Withdrawn Do you understand what I mean when I say crinkle? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #428 Withdrawn That way this center piece can get a little smaller and you can crinkle the left part of the wave 1 year ago sadio commented on #428 Withdrawn i can not see reference picture 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #428 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #428 Withdrawn I think maybe in order to achieve the more smaller even look for the center image in the middle of the O, this section needs to get closer. the O and the C might need to be squeezed together a little bit. and I mean just A LITTLE. Don't get too close. Just move them closer together just a little bit 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #428 Withdrawn did you look at the wave that I uploaded for reference on this part? This part needs to be crinkled 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #427 Withdrawn I just uploaded an audio wave image for you to reference. Take a look at it please just to get better idea 1 year ago sadio commented on #427 Withdrawn I will make revision 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #427 Withdrawn and that bow never got crinkled. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #427 Withdrawn because there's so much dead space to the right of the wave now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #427 Withdrawn now it feels too short. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #426 Withdrawn I think these 2 points should be a little more aligned with each other. This is what I was talking about earlier with the proportions. Without the O, That image at the back should look like a proportionate C. and again I know I keep saying it but I mean SUPER SMALL adjustments 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #426 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #426 Withdrawn Crinkle this section up just a little. right now it looks too clean and almost like a rainbow. Just a LITTLE. again small adjustments. Maybe move the wave over just a LITTLE to the left so you can get rid of a LITTLE of the bow and make it a little more crinkly. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #425 Withdrawn As a matter of fact. For your own self, If that purple O is on its own layer, I'd hide it for a moment. I'd look at the filmstrip/audio wave thing by itself and I'd ask myself, does this image, though stylized, look like a proportionate C? Is the end piece of the wave a little longer than the top part of the C. Aesthetically does this look right without the purple O? These are the questions I would be asking myself. Then once I got the C looking exactly how I want it from a proportions perspective, I'd then slap the Purple O back on the top, making sure that the little spaces are still in place. That's how I'd double check it. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #425 Withdrawn We gotta be thinking that whats behind the O is actually a very stylized C 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #425 Withdrawn Also remember, whats inside the the O is just a continuation of whats outside the O. So the lines curvature should make visual sense when you see it. Just imagine that the Purple O wasn't there. What would this film strip audio wave blend look like it it were one complete line? Gotta visualize it that way so that I makes sense when you put the O back into place and insert the 2 little gaps on either side of the O. We still gotta imagine that those sections, though missing, are still a part of the one same structure. You know what I mean? 1 year ago sadio commented on #425 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #425 Withdrawn and again just keep in mind the stuff has to be subtle. these are really small adjustments. I think they're going to make the difference though 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #425 Withdrawn This is the point that the filmstrip starts again inside the O. I'm wondering if it makes sense for the strip to start up like how you have it, instead of down, the way I horribly drew it? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #425 Withdrawn Obviously I can't draw it that well with the tools given to me. But do you see what I mean? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #425 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #425 Withdrawn I see what you're doing with the film strip. If thats the angle that you're going to start the thing at, maybe it should look a little more like the line I'm about to draw. 1 year ago sadio commented on #425 Withdrawn please check 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #424 Withdrawn I think I also see a slight gradient of gray where the film strip and the audio wave intersect or maybe I'm just seeing things. BUT It gave me an idea. Can we start the top corner of the filmstrip with a gradient of grey going into black and have the black get darker as it blends into the audio wave making the audio wave the blackest it can possibly be? In other words we start at the top corner of the film strip gradient white/grey then continue on through the film strip grey black and by the time it gets to the audio wave its completely black? 1 year ago sadio commented on #424 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #424 Withdrawn these amendments are very very minor edits. they shouldn't be huge adjustments. Really careful details. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #424 Withdrawn Also, I'm wondering if this piece, the film strip piece can be a little less straight and actually start bending into the wave just a little bit before it becomes the full on audio wave? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #424 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #424 Withdrawn I'm wondering if we can get the filmstrip/audio wave piece to be just a slight bit smaller and more centered? This piece in the middle of the O. 1 year ago sadio commented on #424 Withdrawn Yes. What should i fix again? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #424 Withdrawn This will be our template moving forward if there's anything else that we need to do. But I think you've done it Sadio. I think you cracked the code!!!!!! πππ 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #424 Withdrawn Let me live with it for a minute. There are 2 very slight things that I feel like might be a little off but this is the closest to the image I have in my head that I've seen so far. 1 year ago sadio commented on #424 Withdrawn Thank you very much 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #424 Withdrawn YES YES YES YES YES. I think this is it Sadio!! ππππΌππΌ 1 year ago sadio commented on #424 Withdrawn please check my new revisions. thank you 1 year ago sadio commented on #409 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #409 Withdrawn And just put a VERY LITTLE gap right here where I added the little mark to keep the illusion of the O being in front of the C 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #409 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #409 Withdrawn The little piece right here that the arrow is pointing to is the only thing that I want you to focus on. Don't change anything else. Just make this little piece right here look like it's the filmstrip. Don't touch any other part of the wave. Just focus on this little piece right here. Make it look like the film strip. 1 year ago sadio commented on #419 Withdrawn please check. thank you 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #410 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #410 Withdrawn This one looks really great. Without changing the size of the wave Can you make the left piece of the audio wave look like like the film strip as itβs shrinking itself into the audio wave? 1 year ago sadio commented on #402 Withdrawn i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #402 Withdrawn You're on the right track. Just take the film strip of this iteration and take the audio wave from #360 and I think you'll be right there 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #402 Withdrawn Right here its looking great. I can see that the film strip is morphing into a small squiggly line. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #402 Withdrawn if we can get this to look like the audio wave now, I think we'll be in business 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #402 Withdrawn Yes these are sooo much closer but now that end needs to look like an analogue audio wave. right now it just looks like a tail. 1 year ago sadio commented on #265 Withdrawn thank you for your feedback, sorry for the delay, a few hours ago I was on my way, I will do the revision now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #401 Withdrawn I'm envisioning the film strip smoothly transforming into an analog audio wave. The point of transition should show a subtle bending, crinkling and blending effect, like the film strip is seamlessly becoming the audio wave. I want to emphasize that the audio wave is distinct from the film strip; it's not the film strip itself but emerges seamlessly at the point of transformation. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #265 Withdrawn Would also love to see the same treatment with this iteration of the icon arrangement Sadio. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #401 Withdrawn What I'm trying to accomplish here is this part of the film strip to twist itself and shrink into a line of the wave. Not just be a single line that leads into the wave. And again, I don't want the line to connect. I want it to be deconstructed. Just appear like it's going to connect. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added annotation for #401 Withdrawn I'm looking for this to still be the audio wave 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #380 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, I uploaded an image of a film strip thats kind of bending in a way where its starting to look like an audio wave. If we can somehow draw inspiration from that image I think we might be able to make it work 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #361 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #361 Withdrawn looking at my 2nd Markup here, Maybe the wave should look more like this. We cut the wave right as its starting to thin out again. Exactly how I've got it crossed out. maybe the film strip morphs into the audio wave inside the O. and the Height of the Audio wave is towards the end of the C instead of being so squeezed up like it is in. #380 1 year ago sadio commented on #361 Withdrawn I Will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #380 Withdrawn yes we're so close. I just need the bottom of the film strip to look like its morphing into the audio. 1 year ago sadio commented on #380 Withdrawn please check 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #375 Withdrawn wanna see if we can get the bottom end of the film strip to kinda look like it's transforming into that wave now while still keeping it disconnected 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #375 Withdrawn Yes!! I think we're getting closer 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #361 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #361 Withdrawn I think I'm doing a bad job of explaining this. Let me tell you how I see the image and maybe that can clear up some of the confusion. To me the way I see this, the purple image is the O and represents Open. and to me the C is both the film strip and the wave combined. Now before we went ahead and made the C an amalgamation of the 2 elements, film strip and a wave form, In my mind it had just been a deconstructed (disconnected) C behind the O. once we introduced the film strip and wave idea, I still wanted that image to look like a deconstructed (disconnected) C behind the solid O. Right now its just a function of making it look aesthetically pleasing and still actually look like a C. while staying in the same orientation of #361 I really hope that makes sense. I wish I could explain it better. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #361 Withdrawn and the end of the wave can't be longer than the top of the C's point 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #361 Withdrawn I wonder if we can get the bottom of the film strip to start squeezing itself in such a way that it looks like its becoming a part of the wave. Just Remember all of this has to stay behind the O and it has to not connect. Just appear like its about to connect. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #366 Withdrawn I see its getting shorter and thats great. The C gotta go Behind the O. and I still want it deconstructed like the original way 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #364 Withdrawn Sorry Sadio, I still want the O to be in front of the C and I still want the C to be deconstructed. I was just thinking maybe the bar that the wave is in or the wave by itself would be slightly shorter. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #364 Withdrawn 1 year ago sadio commented on #362 Withdrawn do you like this? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #361 Withdrawn I'm loving the gradient 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #359 Withdrawn Yeah Sadio, these are looking great. Gotta somehow make that line still look like it's a part of that film strip. Gotta make it look like its a part of the deconstructed C. Everything behind that O gotta still look like its a C. But I swear you're killing it!! This looks great. 1 year ago sadio commented on #358 Withdrawn yes sure, i will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #358 Withdrawn Sadio!!! These are looking great!!. I'm gonna put these out in a survey. Tell me this though. Can you replace that bar that has the wave in it, and make the whole thing just one thick wave? Also, I think the length of that bar is a little too long now too cause it doesn't seem like its a part of the deconstructed C anymore. Gotta somehow still make it look like it's a part of the deconstructed C. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #260 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, in my honest opinion, all of your submissions have been great. I mean really great. I'm wondering though if we can make it that much better. Some people are having a hard time seeing the vision and at the end of the day I want this thing to be memorable to the audience right? So I'm going to type a whole bunch of stuff here. Hopefully you can find some inspiration in it. Keep in mind, I already know that you have at least a good 85% of the things I'm about to type in the logo already but I'm just going to be a bit overly thorough with my explanation so I know we're on the same page. Let's try this. Let's see if we can introduce some new elements to this to make it make more sense to the audience. The Symbol: Should be an open crate as the central symbol, tilted slightly for a dynamic and inviting feel, symbolizing openness and creativity across audio, lighting, and film. (you pretty much got that idea down) Multimedia Elements: Forming the open crate, let's integrate a film strip, and a stylized audio wave. Maybe the black line in the center of the O can be the audio wave and the bigger deconstructed part of the C can be the Film Strip. These elements can come together to signify the holistic approach of The Open Crate Collective, as an audio, and film production company. Color Palette: Utilize a modern and sophisticated color palette consisting of white, grey, black, and hints of purple. White and gradients of grey can be the most prominent, while black can be used for some depth and definition. Introduce gradients of purple as an accent color for specific details. Maybe the film reel and/or audio wave. Incorporate the subtle gradients to evoke lighting effects. Typography: Pair the logo with a clean and modern typeface for "The Open Crate Collective" that complements the color palette. and finally Style: We're aiming for a sleek and professional style, balancing the visual elements to create a cohesive and memorable brand image. The logo should convey a sense of creativity, innovation, and collaboration across all aspects of media production. Again my apologies for overly explaining this or complicating it further because I know you've already got most of this down. But thank you so much for your efforts 1 year ago sadio commented on #349 Withdrawn Please check #351 1 year ago sadio commented on #351 Withdrawn Do you like this? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #349 Withdrawn Hey thanks for doing that. The shift is a little too much now. Can we split the difference? 1 year ago sadio commented on #351 Withdrawn variation 1 year ago sadio commented on #267 Withdrawn Yes. I will make revision 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #267 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, can we shift the box in such a way that the top and bottom points aren't so North and South Pole like? The way it looks right now is more hexagonal than cubed. I don't know if I'm making any sense with the description. Take a look at the broken Box logo again for reference. With that logo, there's a clear indication that the object is sitting on a surface. Whereas this logo feels like its balancing on a point and ready to spin. Does that makes sense? If you're able to make the shift, Can you do that to all the logos that are being ranked? 1 year ago sadio commented on #258 Withdrawn I will send now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #258 Withdrawn What would this one look like with the Grey C and the Black Border? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #264 Withdrawn Yes the grey combination is nice. Looking for some black in there somewhere as well 1 year ago sadio commented on #264 Withdrawn do you like grey color combination? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #257 Withdrawn I always want to maintain that image in every rendition moving forward. Thats the thing that looks like a media file. Thats the thing that really looks awesome to me. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective added markup for #257 Withdrawn 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #264 Withdrawn like 257 and 261 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #264 Withdrawn I think the O should always be in front of the C. That's the only way you'll achieve that file folder looking thing in the middle of the O. 1 year ago sadio commented on #262 Withdrawn please check 1 year ago sadio commented on #236 Withdrawn I will make it now 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #236 Withdrawn And make the O purple like you #257 and the C maybe a shade of grey 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #236 Withdrawn Can you put the O in front of the C on this one? Similar to #257? 1 year ago sadio commented on #260 Withdrawn font variation 1 year ago sadio commented on #257 Withdrawn do you like this? 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #39 Withdrawn the purple circle looks like the O and the black lines looks like its forming a C behind the O. and that little black line in the O kinda gives that white opening in the purple the appearance of a media file. Good stuff, ππΌππΌ 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #39 Withdrawn almost like some sort of a media file. Thats what it seems like to me at least. 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #39 Withdrawn I like this one because the purple O actually kinda looks like there's a file in that box 1 year ago sadio commented on #39 Withdrawn Thanks for feedback. I will make variation 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #39 Withdrawn Can you do the same thing with this one? 1 year ago sadio commented on #210 Withdrawn Yes. thank you for your feedback. please check my new designs revision, what should i fix again? thank you 1 year ago Open Crate Collective commented on #210 Withdrawn Hey Sadio, this is looking good. Lets try it with The Open Crate on one line of text and then Collective on the 2nd line of text by itself. Let the first line of text be slightly bolder than the 2nd line of text and let the word Collective be the same length as the 1st line of text. 1 year ago