#28 Pictoral Mark is too large, it's distracting from The Moto Channel lettering which is the most important part of the logo. You may want to delay any further designs of a Wordmark until tomorrow when we will post a page on our website with some motorcycle images that should help you to design an appropriate Pictoral Mark. We will post the link in the Contest Discussion below. Thank you.
#36 Refer to #28.
#35 Please do not attempt to design the word MOTO as a motorcycle. We do not like this approach to designing the logo.
#108, #109 and #110 The Pictoral Mark should be to the left of the Word Mark, not within the WordMark. Also, we have posted on our website examples of motorcycle art that we feel capture the action, passion, and excitement of motorcycling (which are the top three things to communicate through our logo) in order to clarify what we are looking for in a Pictoral Mark.
#133 Very good! The motorcycle has very good detail (and color!). But the size of the rider's body needs to be increased some because it is not large enough relative to the motorcycle size. Can you increase the body size by about 20%? Also it would be nice to give some definition to the rider's face. You could do that with some goggles.
Also we can't see the rider's boot. Is it possible to give more definition to the boot?
to see the font. Please note, we are only interested in the font, not the red graphic background that the letters are on. And of course the letters should have color, not white.
#154 and #156 These entries appear identical in color and design. We can't tell them apart. We see a change in font but this is not the font we resuested. Again you can visit:
to see the font we are interested in. Please note, we are only interested in the font, not the red graphic background that the letters are on. And of course the letters should have color, not white.
#154 and #156 It also appears that our request to increase the size of the motorcyclist by approximately 20% was not done. We think the rider is a little too small when compared with the size of the motorcycle. We would also like to see definition in the riders face through goggles (so you don't have top draw eyes).
Also we can't see the rider's boot. Please give some definition to the rider's boot.
#158 Better! The boot and motor appear more defined but the body of the rider appears the same size (helmet, shoulder, arms) so it's too small compared with the motorcycle. The body should be increased in size.
Also, we would like to see definition of the face. You can do this with goggles. Perhaps instead of a completely black face, you can make a white face with simple lines to define the the cheek and jaw.
Also, we don't see the font that we resuested. Again you can visit:
to see the font we are interested in. Please note, we are only interested in the font, not the red graphic background that the letters are on. And of course the letters should have color, not white.
#160 the size of the rider's body needs to be increased some because it is not large enough relative to the motorcycle size. We would like to see the body size increased by 20%.
We would also like to see this design with a different font. Please visit the website of Speed Channel:
to see the font. Please note, we are only interested in the font, not the red graphic background that the letters are on. And of course the letters should have color, not white.
We sent you a message yesterday requesting changes to your entry #160 as you we have currently ranked you as the 1st client, yet we have not received a response from you.
Are you going to make the changes that we requested?
We would appreciate a prompt response from you. Thank you.
#167 Very good Pictoral Mark! Thank you for the detail with reference to proportions. Yes you are correct these are good proportions.
The only suggestions for changes we would make are the addition of two small lines. One line around the chin to give definition to the chin and one line around the inside of the knee to give definition to the leg and knee.
to see the font that we prefer. Please note, we are only interested in the font, not the red graphic background that the letters are on. And of course the letters should have color, not white.
Ok-Here are the changes suggested by the client to the pictorial mark, Ok-Here are the changes suggested by the client to the pictorial mark: Definition of the chin and definition of the leg and knee.