In regards to entry's 1,2, and 3 let's add an M and a C for MOJC, and we will need some kind of border around the red portion of the logo since it will be up against a red background. We would like to see a crucifix incorporated to see that kind of concept. Also a concept of the text layered over MOJC might give a nice effect if blended well. Keep em coming!!
#5 would be better suited if the cross had more a t shape by shortening the left and right sides and lengthening the lower portion of the cross. More like an actual cross
#5, 10, and 17. I am not really keen on the color and how its displayed. 11 and 12, the cross is generic. Would like to see something with christ on the cross if a cross is to be incorporated on its own layer.
On #19, can you fill in the circle with white to make a host and extend the emanating light a little - that would be representative of Christ on the cross giving light to the world.
Not a problem, I updated our comments and our brief. Here is a snippet: Christ on the cross somewhere or walking up calvary with a cross in the design as well as something to signify forward momentum of men moving from being timid to stepping outside of their comfort zone, but yet keeping a very modern feel and keeping an intense look to it. It needs to portray manliness where it signifies strength in our mission. But take a look at our comments and updated briefs
We would like to see a more powerful christ and bigger in proportion. As I continue to look at the logo I start to get the feeling that MOJC is more significant that Christ and he needs to be the focus. The christ in 35 is very significant of strength and victory. May need to revise a concept.
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