I like the way the text sits with "nation" Entry #16, but I still like it in red the best. If you can do that in red I think that will look best. Me and my guys are in a battle over who we have ranked 1-4. We need an outside vote to seal the deal. Thanks for all your hard work.
wonderful, I'm glad you guys like it. I like the way the text sits in #16 better also, I had made some subtle changes to the intercharacter spacing and placement between #16 and #8.... here it is in red.
I think red is a good color for this cause it does represent sexuality in sort of a gender neutral way. I'm trying not to over-do the sexual elements because it's so easy to get carried away with it and being subtle is a much more powerful effect.
This one is the same as the last one... except I lowered to 'head' of the letter B to the same level as the word 'the'. This helps keep the vertical ratio a bit more consistant which will pay off big time in real world usage. The effect is just as strong.