What’s working: Very fun and eye-catching!
What’s off: The rainbow style has a youthful tone that feels more kid-focused than what we’re aiming for.
Can we try: Maybe simplifying the arch or integrating it in a way that feels a bit more grown-up or rooted in the 70s style?
Thanks for your feedback. Please check #187, #188, #189 and let me know if you have anything to ask. I will be happy to answer any questions you may have.
Thank you and have a nice day.
This is a fun direction and I’m drawn to the softness in the design. Can you swap the pink and grey tones out for colors from our official palette (uploaded in the contest - retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan)? Would also love to see a version with some bolder typography—something more vintage, like you’d find on 70s signage.
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What’s off: The rainbow style has a youthful tone that feels more kid-focused than what we’re aiming for.
Can we try: Maybe simplifying the arch or integrating it in a way that feels a bit more grown-up or rooted in the 70s style?
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