What’s working: The colors feel great here and the type is really warm and inviting.
What’s off: The awning and the sun feels a little busy.
Can we try: Removing the awning and letting the sunshine element stand on its own? I'm not super fond of the lime green. I've uploaded a color swatch, can you try some of those colors? I like "cactus" green in addition to the 5 colors I uploaded.
Okay, thanks for your feedback.
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This one stands out for its clean structure but feels a little too old fashioned, like my un-hip mom in the 70's but I'm leaning towards my fun-groovy aunt's vibe. Can you adapt it using the retro wave color palette we’ve uploaded and explore a softer or more curved font style? (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan). Something that’s bold but still groovy and organic.
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I'm working on it now and will upload it soon.
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What’s off: The awning and the sun feels a little busy.
Can we try: Removing the awning and letting the sunshine element stand on its own? I'm not super fond of the lime green. I've uploaded a color swatch, can you try some of those colors? I like "cactus" green in addition to the 5 colors I uploaded.
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Please keep my design ranked so I can submit unlimited submissions. I'll send you revisions as soon as I get back to work.
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