What’s working: There’s something compelling about this layout, especially placing “Market” in the awning scallops—it’s unique!
What’s off: The shape gives off “pillow” vibes, and the spacing feels off-balance.
Can we try: Experimenting with a vertical or flatter shape while keeping the scallop idea in play. Consider tighter linework and alignment.
Color Note: Please revise to the final color palette recently uploaded (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan). Thank you!
What’s working: I actually love the playful bounce of the typography. The lower “Market” baseline and heavier type give it an almost food-label vibe. The framing shape is solid and makes it feel buttoned up.
What’s off: There’s too much going on—between the shapes, fonts, gradients, and layout, the logo starts to feel cluttered and difficult to read quickly.
Can we try: Simplifying the composition. Consider removing a few competing elements and leaning into one bold central motif (either the sun or the awning).
Color Note: Please use the final color palette (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan). Thank you!
Hi Jennifer,
I can make all the modifications or variations you might need. I'm here to help even long after the contest ends.
Thank you for this opportunity - Kent
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I'll work on them.
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Kent
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What’s off: The shape gives off “pillow” vibes, and the spacing feels off-balance.
Can we try: Experimenting with a vertical or flatter shape while keeping the scallop idea in play. Consider tighter linework and alignment.
Color Note: Please revise to the final color palette recently uploaded (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan). Thank you!
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What’s off: There’s too much going on—between the shapes, fonts, gradients, and layout, the logo starts to feel cluttered and difficult to read quickly.
Can we try: Simplifying the composition. Consider removing a few competing elements and leaning into one bold central motif (either the sun or the awning).
Color Note: Please use the final color palette (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan). Thank you!
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Kent
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I can make all the modifications or variations you might need. I'm here to help even long after the contest ends.
Thank you for this opportunity - Kent