What’s working: The awning detail feels inviting. The shape and hierarchy of the text is strong.
What’s off: The typeface isn’t quite giving groovy 70s—leaning more vintage feminine instead.
Can we try: A funkier font with more vintage 70s soul, and let’s revise the color palette to match our final retro wave palette (poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan).
Thank you!
The lettering is great and very close to what we’re going for! Feels almost there but could use a little more personality or movement. Perhaps a groovier 70's font. Also, can you update the colors to the uploaded color palette? (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan).
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What’s off: The typeface isn’t quite giving groovy 70s—leaning more vintage feminine instead.
Can we try: A funkier font with more vintage 70s soul, and let’s revise the color palette to match our final retro wave palette (poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan).
Thank you!
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