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Thank you so much for your feedback..
I was sent some revisions regarding your feedback,,
with also some font variations..
hope you like it,
if you need other adjustment please let me know..
I'll pleasure for any revisions that you need.
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What’s working: This is one of our strongest layouts overall. We love the bold central circle and the balance of text and rays.
What’s off: The “Rooted Together” and yellow lines feel like an extra layer that competes with the main name.
Can we try: Removing those two elements? Also—please see the uploaded markup for extra notes!
If you update the font in your other design, can I see it here too, please?
What’s working: This one is really clean and strong. The shape, layout, and use of rays are all spot on.
What’s off: The font is clean but doesn’t quite hit that groovy 70s vibe. I like it, but would like to see something a little more fun.
Can we try: A font variation that’s more playful or era-specific and adding the blue to the rays while keeping everything else the same?
Hello, Thank you so much for your feedback..
I just upload some new revisions beside your feedback..
here #174,#175, #176, #181, #182 and #193..
I'll try to update with some other entries..
your continue feedback will really help us to create perfect logo that you want.
Thank you so much
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
This one feels playful! The awning direction is something we’ve explored—can you try it with wider colored stripes and thinner white ones (reference image just uploaded - mossy green background with a 3 color awning)? Let’s also pull in the colors from the retro wave palette (poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan) to really tie it all together.
Love the use of the sunburst—it echoes the aesthetic we want! I'd love to see the color palette refined to match the final colors we uploaded (retro wave palette: poppy red, gold, mustard, seafoam blue, and tan). Can you try a version with those tones and a few variations on the sun rays to see how it feels? (LOVE the multi colored rays!)
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Could you curve the upper left and right green spaces to look more like rolling hills?
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
I was sent some revisions regarding your feedback,,
with also some font variations..
hope you like it,
if you need other adjustment please let me know..
I'll pleasure for any revisions that you need.
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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What’s off: The “Rooted Together” and yellow lines feel like an extra layer that competes with the main name.
Can we try: Removing those two elements? Also—please see the uploaded markup for extra notes!
If you update the font in your other design, can I see it here too, please?
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What’s off: The font is clean but doesn’t quite hit that groovy 70s vibe. I like it, but would like to see something a little more fun.
Can we try: A font variation that’s more playful or era-specific and adding the blue to the rays while keeping everything else the same?
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I just upload some new revisions beside your feedback..
here #174,#175, #176, #181, #182 and #193..
I'll try to update with some other entries..
your continue feedback will really help us to create perfect logo that you want.
Thank you so much
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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