The dashed line at the bottom as it bends to the left - can you make it more of a right angle into to the County border. The latest downloaded map will show you what I mean. Think that is it.
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I have uploaded a more recent map of the trail alignment through the County. Will likely only affect the bottom of the dashed line. Please take a look and adjust accordingly.
Would like to modify the skyline to more closely mimic Camden City.
If you google Camden City skyline a number of picture will show up. I especially want to get City Hall with its clock tower in the graphic It is the gray building 16 stories. This is a local landmark
Want the red line (trail) to be subtler and not distract the eye so fade to the background. Maybe make this line dashed to distinguish from a political boundary Keep the County border a solid line
Can you try adding a faint line (dashed?) to the county image in background to show the trail as positioned on the map that I had included showing the trail
Really like this version too. Can you experiment with turning the "The" on its side similar to your other logo that used circles? Maybe some color variations for the text. As previously requested, try adding walker to bicyclist block
Looks good thanks. Is that the State outlined behind? Would prefer outline of County. Maybe one with and one without background.Overall I like it. Addition of line ties it together nicely.
Like the bridge. Might try a reverse with bridge to left (west) and trees to right (east). Like the trail wrapping around text. Might try adding another tree or two and experiment with different colors from branding guide.
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This contest is currently in Selection mode. Only the 1st ranked designer will be able to submit entries. If you put me on first rank till I submit the revision then it will be great.
Thanks,
Digiartz
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If you google Camden City skyline a number of picture will show up. I especially want to get City Hall with its clock tower in the graphic It is the gray building 16 stories. This is a local landmark
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Thanks!
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Thanks for feedback. Please see revised entries and let me know if you want any changes.
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Regards,
digiartz
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