Design No 14 has definate merit. Something similar had been in the back of my mind for a while, however with the centre part of the "A" (call it the "swoosh") much bigger, bolder and looking like a tick, perhaps in Red. the spacing on the element "Place" also seems a little wide. We are solicitors, so perhaps any spacing issues could be resolved by putting a line under the design with the word "solicitors" in it (either the word with a line on either side or just the word.) Perhaps even the word "solicitors" inside the swoosh ?
Our office is painted sea green which looks blue under artificial light and a deep green in sunlight.
Hi Mictoon. Other entries of yours which stand out for me are the Topo Energy (page 1), Epowered voyage (p 1) and the My Print Pond on p. 2 of your portfolio.
Mictoon, the "swoosh" is on the right track, (esp, 24 & 25) however I think it has to be bigger if we are going to emphasise it - perhaps some smaller and neater eg 24/25 and one or two with a rough, "brush style" red swoosh - it definately has to be a tick, though going from Left to Right.
26 is the closest to this - maybe with a deeper blue green and the tick running behind the L and up over the P, so it becomes a dominant feature. Would need some sort of lightening behind it so that the letters would be distinguishable if printed in grey scale.
The Green shade we could use is a very deep sea green / blue.