Entry #31: I love the font style choice! Please remove the word "for" before the word "Facial".
Is it possible to make the font size a larger for just the "T" in the word "The", the "L" in "Lanfranchi, and the "C" in Center? The will give the subtle feel of "TLC"
Can you add a slate gray color element please?
I prefer not to have the man and woman facing close together like they are going to kiss (please replace). Can we try using a man and woman more in a profiled silhouette facing the same direction? Can we try something similar to #62349316 from www.shutterstock.com? Perhaps more of a modern/abstract feel?
1. Can we please try using a font style similar to that of entry #20 (more elegant)?
2. Can you slightly curve the bottom of the graphic to remove some of the upper chests on the man and woman? We want a little more focus on the faces and necks.
Hi dr.Paul Thank you so much for your continue feedback.. Really resposive and give us guide to build logo like what you want..:) Here the new adjustment #35, and #36 how do you think? Many Thank's
#36 is looking really nice! The shoulders are much softer and less heavy looking. If possible, can you make the following adjustments?
1. Change the color of the horizontal line that separates "The Lanfranchi Center" from "Facial Plastic Surgery and Rejuvenation" from black to a slate gray color. And possibly make that line a little thicker...
2. Please see if you can vertically align better the black-bolded "T, L, & C" letters so that they read easier in a vertical straight line.
3. When you make the slight adjustment for #2 (above), do you think there needs to be just a little more room (white space) between the black bolded letters of "TLC" so they don't seem so cramped?
We really love the job you are doing...please keep it up and I am hopeful that we will create a great result together. Please, please, please make any suggestions that you feel may be worth showing us!
#40 is looking even better. Thank you for trying #41 and #42, but we really like the layout of #40.
We are still working on the official name of the business. Can you try using #40 and just replace the word "Plastic" with the word "Cosmetic". Do not change anything else. We wish to see which verbiage looks and sounds better.
Hi again.. Dear dr.Paul Update #49 adjustment at neck hopeness you like.. and #50 make sure that the logo also work in one color and B in W. some logo will look good if with complete color but will not work in one color..:) Thank you
#49 looks even better with making the shoulders even softer!
We decided to keep the business name using "Plastic" instead of "Cosmetic", so can you please make all updates with the word "Plastic" instead.
Also, can you make a version or two where the dark grays that are being used throughout are made a bit darker (or even black in some instances)? We still love the gold accents!
1. Place slightly more distance (white space) between the "T", the "L", and the "C" in the vertical aspect. It is a bit hard to distinguish the difference between the letters because they are currently too close together.
2. Try a slightly deeper red color for the woman's lips.
3. Try making the horizontal bar between 'The Lanfranchi Center' and "Facial Plastic Surgery and Rejuevenation" slate gray (vs. black).
4. Try slightly decreasing the entire size of the man/woman/arch graphic so that it's top portion aligns perfectly with "The"
Hello.. Thank you again for continue guide.. How about #67? for your no.#3 request my apologize other designer was use that layout first I should recpect because this competition.. if you need others please let me know.. Thank you
Thank you. # 67 may be better. I'm not sure. There still is unequal space between the black "T" and the "L" ( can you add a little more white space between them to match the distance between the "L" and "C"? In comparison, I still think #57 has the better balance than 67. What do you think? I think 57 just needs all the text (all of it) "stretched" slightly in the vertical direction to align with the top and bottom of the graphic. That would create a little more space for the bolded TLC to not look so tight? Thanks again! Doc L
Thank you for your hard work...it is paying off! #80 and #81 are better. We did not prefer #82 where all the letters were the same size.
As we get into the next stage, we will work more on overall color adjustments (minor) and slight alignment changes. We may ask for a few variations on the actual font (nothing very different, just a few others to choose from).
Overall, we are very happy with your work thus far!
We are almost there!!! Thank you for your hard work...it is paying off...thank you.
Can we try a few ideas and a few more versions please:
1. On 81, can we try moving the entire graphic of the woman and man slightly higher in position (as compared to the text). Also, can we see if the "L" and "A" in "Lanfranchi" can be brought slightly closer together.
2. Please try a few different versions of gold color so that the gold is a little more yellow looking.
3. Can you try a few different fonts that are similar to the one we are using currently.
Hello again, You have been doing an amazing job. I really hope you end up as the winner...it would be well deserved.
Let's keep image #85 and #89 as the 2 images we will work on going forward. I like their balance as far as size and relationship of position of the graphic and text.
Requests: 1. Can you use either #85 or #89 and use the ORIGINAL gold color that you chose from the first entries? I actually like that gold. Please REMOVE the "fade" (ie in #89) of color in "The Lanfranchi Center"...I don't think it stands out enough.
2. Once request #1 (above) is corrected, can you try using a "slate gray" color element for the line that divides "The Lanfranchi Center" from "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation". Also, can you try making the "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation" in slate gray as well on an example?
3. Did we try making the woman's lips a deeper red yet? If not, could you please try.
Thanks in advance. It has been a pleasure working with you!
Hello... Thank you so much for your responsive feedback.. That really can be guide to achieve logo like what you want..:) Here the update :#109, #110, #111, #112 and about deeper red lips I was did before.. but in this entry I try use more deeper red.. hope this make sense.if you have other suggestion and need change don't hesitate for ask me.. I'll pleasure for help..:)
However, we really like the layout of #107 & #108 (different artist) where the logo and "The Lanfranchi Center" is on top, and "facial plastic surgery & rejuvenation" is along the entire bottom ( with a tapered line to separate that text).
Please try to send a few versions of this style. We are sure they will be fantastic like the rest of your work.
#117 is amazing. Let's not change a thing on that one!
Let's try continuing to modify #115:
1. Can we decrease the size of the entire logo of the man/woman/swoosh graphic so it is not so large? I feel it looks a little too big compared to the text.
2. For the text "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation", can you make the first letter of each word slightly larger than the other letters? Do exactly the same style as you did in all previous versions.
Hello again.. Thank's for feedback again.. Dear dr Paul, when the contest ended Final Files will be send as EPS format also other format file. that can be enlarge to all size.:) Thank you
No worries...so sorry....my computer crashed when I was re-ranking earlier...you are still #1! See the most recent ratings. But you do have good competition!
Can we make a few changes on the top two selections please. I hope you win!
For #117: 1. Use the original (brighter) color red for the woman's lipstick...I prefer the earlier versions with brighter lipstick.
2. Place a little more space between the letter "C" and the letter "e" in the word "Center"...like you did for #133.
3. Can you make the text font size for "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation" slightly smaller, and move that text away slightly from the faces so that the "F" and "&" line up nicer underneath the "TLC"
4. Can you try a version where all the black text color for "TLC" and "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation" is replaced with very dark gray.
For #130: 1. Use the original (brighter) color red for the woman's lipstick...I prefer the earlier versions with brighter lipstick.
2. Place a little more space between the letter "C" and the letter "e" in the word "Center"...like you did for #133.
3. On the bottom line, is the letter "F" in "Facial" the same font size as the "P" in "Plastic, the "S" in "Surgery" etc.??? The letter "F" looks smaller, but I may be wrong. Can you make the font size for "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation" slightly bigger without changing the font style (I like).
4. Can you try a version where all the black text color for "TLC" and "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation" is replaced with very dark gray.
Hello again... Thank you so much :) .. Here #150, #151, #152 actualy the F is the same size..but now I make a little bigger now.. lips rechange to original red.. Hopeness you like... Thank you
Could I trouble you for one last adjustment before the final decision?
For #151 - I think you moved the "Facial Plastic Surgery & Rejuvenation" text over too much when you changed #117 to #151. Could you try moving that text back towards the faces "just a little" so that it is in between the location in #117 and #151?
That should be it before our final decision. We are having all our employees together this morning to pick our artist. I'm a fan of yours and hope the rest of the staff agrees!
Hello again. We don't know if we like 158 or 161 better. Which do you like better?
Please don't change 158.
For #161, can we try to make the graphic of the woman and man slightly smaller, AND move it slightly closer to the text? We want them to look more proportional and united.
#167 looks better. Do you agree? My staff and I are going to review the entries in the next day or so. Some of them like the other artist, so I am allowing him to TEMPORARILY be in 1st place so he can upload new versions of his work. Personally, I like your work the best, and since it's my business, I will be the one who has final say, so that is a good thing! :) I'm sure you understand. You have been my #1 the entire time! I will re-rank later on. Thanks! Doc L
Now, can you please give us a few background color examples where this logo will look good (keeping all gold/ blk/ red/ gray logo colors - not monotone)? We need to know it will work well on a website...
Can you try what you did on #170 with a few different colors (gray/greens, blue/grays beige). We want to see what it would look like on a painted wall. Thanks again! Doc L
#173 is what it will look like in black and white. Can you slightly adjust the lips to have a little more white between the top and bottom red lip so that you can see the white line better when we use the image in black and white.
We are afraid the the woman's mouth in black and white looks scary because we can not see the white space between the lips too good.
Hello dr Paul... Thank you so much for your respectfully I understand that you temporary change the rank and if others like the other artist.this competition and sometime I should hard work for make client satisfied :). Thank you for respectfully for who come first with the layout.. Best Regards Amanterkendali